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Haha! This turned out great! I'm not gonna lie though, I really liked it when the lion had blood on its feet, but this is still great. Good job!
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Put some shadows on the ground and maybe plants. You can also try another tee's colors.
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Shadows sounds like a great idea, Also, thanks Kit :]
I originally had been butting up to the Color limit, but now I have a free one. Let me see what I can do then. |
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Working on a v2. Will be out by tonight.
Ya'll agree though? Shadows would help to ground the entire thing. |
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Have a vulture circleing the carcus waiting for the lion to leave
I'm up for scoring, can you help me out and leave a comment http://www.threadless.com/submission/278260/Creative_Relief |
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Never use the templates from the submission kit. It's a newbie trap and will definitely lower your score. Here's agood resource: Click As for the design itself, first you need a good concept, a story, if you want to draw something simple. Now all I see is a lion and a corpse. Doesn't make me go "Ha! Never thouhgt of that!". Although the lion's head looks like a wet sunshine with a bone in his face. Maybe you could go for a visual pun and draw a lions head rising like the sun above the cliff a la "The Lion King". The skeleton is clearly auto-traced from some photo, clashes stylistically with the lion, and adds nothing. I'd lose it. Keep it up. |
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Agree on shadows definetly. Like the liny face of the lion but don't quite get his mouth. Maybe some more linework on the skeleton (inside)
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I've been fiddling around with design for quite awhile now - From poofy ball tail to something less distracting, from a black and white carcass to a simple skeleton, and from a watercolor feel to something more simple.
Also, went for compliments on shirt color - Other ideas have been using a deep Red or Gold.
:] Let me know what ya'll think.