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v1 Excelsior!, 718 days ago, click to expand
v2 Excelsior!, current version








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Version 1 - 718 days ago
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robbielee
   robbielee on Jun 08 '10
One slide like this?

V1 or V2?
andreapetrecca
andreapetrecca on Jun 08 '10
V2!
squintygirl
squintygirl on Jun 08 '10
I love the bold colours.
Mondar
Mondar on Jun 08 '10
OMG THIS IS AWESOME!
I like the turquoise version with the bolder colors.
I just think you need to make that whale look more like a whale. Add some eyes/ whale-ish patterns? Like that white stuff you find on humpback whales.
That whale just looks like a rock to me.

Now do you think you could critique mine also?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/59439/Handsome_Vampire
mache toloache
mache toloache on Jun 08 '10
lovely illo
i like the light blue tshirt.
and i think too that whale needs a patterns as the rest of illustration
errant dog
errant dog on Jun 08 '10
LOVE LOVE LOVE the frog! ^.^

I think I prefer the light blue, but either is great.
Alaabahattab
Alaabahattab on Jun 08 '10
VERY NICE!!!! SUBMIT IT!!!

Vote for Coffee Anan!
sainttomn
sainttomn on Jun 08 '10
I prefer the softer colors in the V2 illustration. Great design and title. That is obviously a whale.

Submit it, and win. This is perfect. Far more perfect than... Karate Mans!
Chris Rowson
   Chris Rowson on Jun 08 '10
V2 is perfect. Nothing wrong with the whale, sub it!!
robbielee
   robbielee on Jun 08 '10
Subbed! Thanks for the great feedback on v1 vs v2, and I appreciate the whale tips, but I like it kind of featureless- I think it helps sell the "frog = close, whale = far" concept
egj1973
egj1973 on Jun 08 '10
yes!
tager01
tager01 on Jun 08 '10
I love it. V2 is perfect....

check mine here
Kneez
Kneez on Jun 08 '10
V2 and in the darker blue

any advice for me
http://www.threadless.com/critique/69527/Flash_Mob
2 days later
King56
King56 on Jun 11 '10
I would totally buy the light blue !

really like your drawing style , I say submit it !


if you have any advice on mine, it would be much appreciated.
http://www.threadless.com/critique/69856/47_Cougars
King56
King56 on Jun 11 '10
I would totally buy the light blue !

really like your drawing style , I say submit it !


if you have any advice on mine, it would be much appreciated.
http://www.threadless.com/critique/69856/47_Cougars
King56
King56 on Jun 11 '10
oops , sorry about the double post
doodlesareAWESOME
doodlesareAWESOME on Jun 11 '10
thats actually really good!!! i would wear that!


hey what does mine need? http://www.threadless.com/critique/69914/Paper_beats_rock_yeah_right
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