I appreciate any thoughts, thanks in advance everyone, leave a link and I will critique any of your work too

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very cool design i like the top left blue. the pink is not working for me. also maybe a little bit more distinction between the hair and the shirt.
thanks for your critique

Awesome... Forget what he said ^ about the hair, it looks really cool. I say go for it!

Oh, and I like it best on the two darker blues (top left and right).

I don't quite understand what's going on by just looking at the image. If you are going for a zombie look, it seems like you should make the girl a little more zombie like. Can you explain your thoughts behind the design? Nice style though! keep working on it :)

hey I took your suggestion with the text. does it make sense now?


http://www.threadless.com/critique/70767/2_Peas_in_a_Pod

i'm diggin the placement and vibrant colors. i'd try cleaning it up a bit and i'd like to see more little green weapons and stuff too. great start!

whoa, this is crazy! good crazy. I like the bottom left version best. One thing I'm not so sure about are the skulls and daggers and such, they don't quite fit. I would leave in the bullet belt but make it fit more with the design of the gun.

definitely cool, but yeah don't pick a color that is so bright because then you can't tell whats going on. you need something that is distinct but doesn't hurt your eyes too much.

Even though it's not my type of appeal, I'm gonna respect it. I'll say this much: the one in the dark blue...I could wear that one. It has an "it" to it, kinda like Andy Warhol meets punk rock. Now that I think about it...pretty damn cool! You should definitely submit it!

Sorry! I'm new here. I hit submit after posting comment. Does that count?

yup

Bold and Nasty (In a good way) Think the drk blue looks best

new version, zombied her up a little. I will add any more changes to the other colors, but I only had time to work on these two tonight.

Thanks everyone for all your comments so far! much appreciated. Leave a link and I will critique yours too.

how about adding some blood..??

I love the dark blue one!! I think its my favorite out of all the colors from your 1st version as well... I'm not sure how I'm feeling about the pirate sword... but overall I think its good!



If you have the time please let me know what you think :)
http://www.threadless.com/critique/70807/BoomTree

this is looking very nice!
I would like to see the placement to give you a real opinion and advice:)

Killer B

The orange on navy blue looks best. I'm not entirely sure I get the concept, but maybe that's beside the point.

And please don't add blood. It would do nothing to improve the image.

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I love it but am not feeling the cutlass or snake at the moment. Love the dark blue. It's way more sinister.

If you get time ...
http://www.threadless.com/critique/65851/analogue_heaven

I think the light blue version works best, but you should photoshop it on shirt model to see it how it sits on the tee.

great design!!! I liked the dark blue one......and i'm not sure about that pirate's sword either.....maybe you could change to a black rouded bomb or something....
But awesome work!

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To me that gun looks a little strange as it seems to small in comparison to her head. Maybe you could change it to a revolver or something?

^what chris said

Very cool. I agree with what Morkki said. I would love to see the placement on a tee to get a real feel for what the shirt will look like. Wild!

Great artistic design! I agree with chriss. Also, consider trying to match the style of the weapons to look more similar to the girl. It's looking great! :)

I love the top one. The colors are great. I think the Ak is a little hard to see now though. Also I dont know about the pirate sword and I think you should add some blood maybe. It might work with blood or it might not. Looks great so far!

- Kevin

If you strip this down, take all the unnessecary stuff like snakes, knives, and lightning away and maybe scale the gun down a bit, this could easily be one of the best tees I've seen in a long time. The placement in the initial upload fits perfectly, just like a tee in this style should. Indigo/dark blue or natural with the green colors looks amazing, and the style on the zombie girl has a perfect touch of chaos :)

The linework is pixelly, the symbols are weird, and I don't get why she's a zombie.

i love it! great design...i like the lighter blu one better...i think you should put the light blue face on the dark blue tee. Great work!!

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I like the top one better. The colors are a lot better than the neon. I would like to see this placed on a shirt.

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thanks for the tips!
this is awesome!
the top one looks better because of the contrast
but i don't really get the concept

new version with the shirt for placement changed the gun and some other stuff.

Thanks for everyone's comments!

leave links and I'll comment on yours.

it seems to me like there are still too many layers and too much going on that doesn't serve a purpose or relate to the concept.

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http://www.threadless.com/critique/70146/60_s_style
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May have too many colours for printing, then again i've seen more.

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very cool looking. make sure you dont have too many colors and get this printed

cool. upper top left is the best.

very nice, but maybe consider making the gun a revolver just because it's a well known gun and I think it would look better. I also suggest you calm it down a bit. It's kind of hard to look at with everything going on.

If you get the time... http://www.threadless.com/critique/70457/LoveNotWar

I agree with armoredFowl- upper left is by far my fav color combo. Have you tried putting it on a model? I feel like this one might look better in presentation on a model- not just a flat T. I love all the flashy color & style though- definitely making great progress!

My little Joey design is up for scoring! I'd love if you could hop on over, comment, and score him!

What if you got rid of the octopus arms background and added something else like splattering blood? But still make sure to keep the color if it really subtle so its not too busy. or maybe just no background at all? looking good though!

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honestly i don't thinkg it'll look good coming down from a shoulder itd probably be better coming up from the bottom of the shirt. it would get too distorted wrapping around a persons shoulder

i agree with cntrlatdel, nice thought into the idea though. keep trying! I would buy it!

Pls comment on my design too

i prefer the dark blue version

Please help me out and rate my design: Killer B

I really like the graphics and the colors on the dark blue T the best.

Thanks for everyone's comments, I am going to make some changes soon, but just an update that I just added a new critique. Let me know what you htink if you have time! Turbulent Sun

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