Very mathmatical. Would make the font more clear

I'm up for scoring. Please have a look and score kindly. Leave a comment to tell me what you think
http://www.threadless.com/submission/275259/Old_School_Rockers

i LIKE it. except you spelled "vendor" wrong. but thats unimportant. i think maybe making the design slightly larger would be beneficial, as far as making the font more readable goes. i would hesitate to tell you to make the font larger, but if you simply increase the size of the whole design it might help.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/68806/Sunkissed

The spelling is a play on words with the t shirt displaying a Venn Diagram.

To be sincere, this isn't a true Venn Diagram, so please change the spelling ;)

Otherwise it's quite a cool concept... But I would probably drop the legen on the right and make the left image bigger. And drop the frame too.

Please critique mine too: http://www.threadless.com/critique/69029/Pair_of_mittens and http://www.threadless.com/critique/68992/In_the_box

I agree with dropping the frames and legend

hmm, like the concept, but i think you might want to remove one or two types of coffee for simplicity sake, also makes it more clear i think
Check out mine too plz!

I think I might drop the mocha and the hot chocolate for simplicity's sake (although I don't really want to leave anything out). Def going to lose the box, but I really want to keep the legend.

mixed some colours up a bit, removed box and integrated key a bit better

Better.

Added Espresso

Question: Flat White or Au Lait?

Au lait. Cool coffee design!

Wanna check my coffee design out?:
http://www.threadless.com/critique/69101/Coffee_Makes_the_World_Go_Round

bump, any last thoughts? au lait it is