This is a draft of an idea that I have. I was thinking of adding color to it. I'm not sure if I should keep it within this cartoonish style or make it more artsy and stylized altogether.

Any suggestions?

yeah, add some colour to it.
good luck :)

if you have a minute, critique mine? thanks :)

colors :D

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Go team glasses. Would add some colour.

I'm up for scoring. Please have a look and score kindly. Leave a comment to tell me what you think
http://www.threadless.com/submission/275259/Old_School_Rockers

simple and funny!
but needs some colours :)

Great idea I think you can definitely add to it! colors perhaps bodies for the heads??

Care to comment!?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/68886/The_Music_Lounge

Same thing CZMJ said, and maybe on a shirt that isn't white.

I uploaded a new version for my critique,
if you have time please view and comment on my

design tnx!

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What do you think?

I still need to tweak it a bit. Not sure what color glasses.

happy faces!
i like it because it's so simple, might do well because of the upcoming summer

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Here is another version in 2 color print. It works well on medium blue, turquoise, red, and any medium or light color.

ah, that's awesome... i like the transparant glasses!
i would rework the shine on the glass a bit, they could be more different.

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Walk on Water is up for voting

Cool ^^ Its very cute; need more shinning in the glass
please check mine

This is so cute. I like this version the best. How about lines as shine?

If you have time please help me score my design. Thank you!

I really like this version, but also liked the colour you used within version 2. How about using some of the colour within 2 and transferring it into the 3rd one? As people are saying have some sort of shinning in the glass, can you reveal some of the face colour within the shine, if you get what i mean? Hope you do, cause the design is looking neat!

LAST DAY, please rate!

i like this version best!! especially on the turquoise, really really nice! i'd give it a $5

I'm going to edit the shine. Thanks for the suggestions!

Update.

Two colors + black halftone.

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yep, that's a nice shine 8-)

thanks for your island support

Great! I like it very much!! I'm not sure about the tee color, but it's only my opinion. With your design suits any light color =)

See my Italian Love. What do you think about it?

Yes, other tee colors work well.

hahaha I like this concept a lot but im not too sure about the faces in the glasses. Maybe change them around a bit or add color to them. Good work!

This looks really cool. I like the look of everything but the fork especially. Honestly I think the idea of the meatball and spaghetti string together on the fork is a better idea and concept. Its as if they were picked to be eaten and fell in love or something like that haha. I just think it looks better. Good luck.


Can you help me out on my design and critique me?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/69103/Life_of_a_city

what color tee would you like to see this on?

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It is up for voting!

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