Simple idea I had for both the Loves Coffee challenge as well as the Minimalism Design Challenge.

this is great

Simple , yes. Cool,yes.

Thanks, but don't be afraid to get picky with it. I know it is simple but I'm sure there is something I could improve. The shapes? The interaction between items? Anything.

does the top and handle of the thermos bother anyone else?

make the handle of the thermos go into the back, like you did with the mug handle...
And i somehow don't like the straw go through. You didn't paint the inside of the thermos, so why there?
Wanna crit mine?

Thanks for the feedback. I think I see what you are saying about the straw. I was going for a clear cup with coffee in it but you are right in that you would still not see the straw going all the way down. It would disappear at the top of the coffee.

the only thing that stuck out to me was that the thermos handle is boxy compared to rest of the lines in the design. otherwise great execution and cool idea!

Help with scoring, please?

Yeah. I think I'll fix that handle for sure. I'm on the fence on the Straw issue.

hey this is great i think.
can you check out
mine?

thanks

This is very clever. Front runner for the prize in my mind.
I have a design up for scoring. Have a look and please score kindly, leave a comment to tell me what you think.
http://www.threadless.com/submission/275259/Old_School_Rockers

haha very clever sweet

can you check out mines thx
http://www.threadless.com/critique/68928/Average_Joe

nice I like it

Please rate my work!Please rate my work!

thanks for the feedback. I'll try and make the minor adjustments to it later and post the v2 soon.

well it think you can definitely push it for a more minimal look, maybe reduce some of the details (like the bottom of the thermos and the rims of the paper to-go cups)
but i love it :)

Made some minor adjustments to the design. I think I'm happy with this version. What do you think?

Awesome! Simple, great colors! I think its fantastic! Just an idea, but if you put a small twig with a coffee berry and leaf with the bean inside on the back side upper middle I would think amazingness!!!!!! something like:
http://www.fluids-dynamics.com/main/public/visuel_coffee_berry_2.jpg

Care to comment on mine!?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/68886/The_Music_Lounge

interesting idea

Here's some pickiness - where the straw enters the take-away cup looks odd to me, I don't think it should be flat, but rather curved up or down (depending on how you want the viewer to look at it). I'd be inclined to say curved down slightly.

looks nice, and clever idea.. I like this flat stile.