For some reason I keep thinking of the tuxedo t-shirts. Maybe if I added a string of pearls and such someone could wear this and a friend could wear the tuxedo t?
I'm sorry you're not getting any feedback at all. Problem is there are just some designs out there that need so much work, we don't really know where to begin.
It's a fun gimmicky idea that Threadless has a history for liking (see Beat It, Dandy, We Are All Pink, Sexy Pack, Advisors, Not Your Average Polo, Smooth Criminal, Deerie...) I personally would never wear anything like that, but the fact is they do get printed.
But at the moment your design is just so... unfinished. The colour is really blah, you have almost no details and there's even a gradient in the drop shadow, which is a strict no-no.
So short of telling you to 'draw better', it's really hard to offer any critique.
By the way, it's really no slight on your drawing skills. Your other subs show that you can draw. This one just needs a bit more... well, just a bit more, I guess.
o.k. thanks. I will work on it more. Maybe oranges would be better. I guess i just wanted to know if anyone liked they basic idea before I put more into it. Not being lazy just don't want to waste my time on something no one will like no matter how good or bad it looks.
To be honest, I'm not interested in wearing a shirt like this, but I did really want to say that the progress made from V1 to this version is excellent. Great job, keep up the good work, good luck, etc. =)
Does anyone like the idea?