what do you think?

can i submit it?

upp

ahahah good idea!
i havent seen that franklin in forever.
i think my only suggestion is to maybe make more of a difference in your line thicknesses in his face.
but thats just me being really picky.
i think its submit ready other than that!
awesome idea

Critique mine if you have the time
If you were wondering...Yes, Astronauts Golf

maybe throw in some more Ben Franklin references. some constitution type stuff, hundred dollar bills, kite and key? just a little something to solidify this weird, very good drawing.