ummm well this is basically a wind tubine being unable to run a simple digital watch. well this is my first design and i dont have a clue with vector programs i dont even take it at school so i think i have done alright... please comment and tell me what you think plus some tips would be great.

Right away, I didn't know that was a digital watch. I see the time, but it didn't click until I read your post. Maybe if you made it look more like a clock, or watch, it would make more sense?

Nice turbine tho!

yea i think whatever message your trying to send needs to be more obvious

or people that see that shirt will just think they are weird

thanks guys but this is the extent of detail i can achieve with my noob skills. i'll try tho

Cool, I'm pumped to see your new versions : )

what's so bad about wind power? It's a lot less pollutifying than most other types of power plants.

Hi Tim. First, let me say congratulations for joining Threadless. I look forward to seeing what ideas you come up with.

As for this design, I'll give you the benefit of an objective critique and avoid comments like "that is so gay" and "by clever you mean sh*t" which you seem so fond of on other people's work. I don't think the concept is coming through, which hurts the design from the start. It's obviously about wind power, but anything past that is a mystery. Maybe clarify your idea more, and the design will be stronger. The execution of the design is straightforward enough: black and white. silhouetted. clean. But the problem is one of proportion and visual interest. Either the clock is huge or the turbine is tiny. Either would be fine, but since you've given us little clue about the concept, it makes the shirt seem plain. Also, because you've chosen such a simple representation for the objects, the viewer becomes caught up on the details, which in this case are not very well illustrated.

I hope this was helpful but honestly, I wouldn't be surprised if you just called me a name or something very immature like that. Good Luck!

nah i didnt call you a name. i laughed because i forgot all about it. anyways thanks for the critisism. its good. i dont even like this tee. i just did it to practice. there really isnt much of a message. too be honest i cant be bothered changing it at the moment because i have no time due to me getting straight A's in school(arogant i know). oh yeah sorry raisenochicken for bagging your design..not nice i know.