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Qxzi on May 17 '10
Hmmm add some shading to the shirt, and i agree with marcus. The shirt seems very flat. The left hand seems very floppy and doesnt seem to be his real hand. Nice idea tho! KEEP GOING!
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added the collar behind his neck, to get more dept.
added some extra shading on the arms. also reworked his left hand. what do you think? |
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thanks marcuspan...
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oh man, those shoes should have been red indeed!
will change them tomorrow :-) don't know about the hair (could become a copyright problem when it's exactly the same as the real wally's hair...will look into it) |
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gave him the proper red shoes and i'm thinking of giving him a red wig on his head...
because i think he can't wear his own hat where he's working. what do you think? |
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krearchiv on May 18 '10
rework the face I'd say. Its kind of.. flat
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krearchiv on May 18 '10
ah. and take another color for the shirt.
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i can add some shade to the face as i did the rest of the body.
i'm actually looking for a proper background. to get the "where is wally?" idea more. any suggestions? |
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Chriszetiger on May 18 '10
Hahaha This is looking good! However, it may contradict the "Where's Waldo" thing. Well, doesn't matter..this is great
Another Tee color would be nice! |
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Chriszetiger on May 18 '10
oh and Please rate mine as well :)
http://www.threadless.com/submission/273480/Tangyyy |
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thinking of giving him a broom instead of his cane, and add some restaurant waste (garbage) on the floor he's working on...
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Qxzi on May 18 '10
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still have to color all the garbage, but this will be the idea :-)
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be Ray on May 18 '10
This is a great style. The garbage is a great idea. The only thing that stands out to me is the blue socks. The extra color is unneeded.
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elvisshow on May 18 '10
I dont think they are blue socks. Its waldo, and he is hiding, Waldo wears blue pants, which is the color at the bottom. I think I am right anyway. I do like this, and all the junk at the bottom is nice. I dont draw in this style, but i really like it. I want to see it when the garb gets its color.
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elvisshow is right.
the blue aren't socks, the blue color is wally's own blue pants :-) he's just wearing other shoes, an overall and a pair of gloves. maybe the title should be: How May I Serve You? (because of the broom?) |
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alismith85 on May 18 '10
Agreed, add some colour to the garbage and then submit. Nice work.
Also, could you give my latest a quick look if you get a chance? Thanks. Bluetooth |
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with colored garbage :-)
title: How May I Serve You? when nobody is looking, he is moonlighting at a restaurant near you... |
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elvisshow on May 19 '10
I love it. It looks great, I would go for it man, i think this might be a winner.
If you dont mind can I get some input on some changes i Have made to mine? Check mine Please? That Ain't Mine |
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AhDan on May 19 '10
nicely done.
nothing major to critique about it :) check out my design : beauty of the east backstabber |
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@MarcusPan
without the hat? hmm. i'll look into it, but don't know if it will be right, because he's really recognizable with that hat... he might end up looking like just an ordinairy guy.... |
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erelca on May 20 '10
yes! ready to submit! I like it!
Please rate & comment the love story of my Zebra Zebra (zebras are only horses who wear pajamas) |
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elf09 on May 20 '10
this is cool
can u check out mine? http://www.threadless.com/critique/67012/Follow_the_Music |
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Leyaexcolosi on May 20 '10
Ronald McWaldo yeah! if you like more dramatic then try something with shadows ;-)
what do you think about mine: honey bunny |
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ahah excellent and winner idea!
i am not sure of you final shadows on his face (on the right), it makes him less stellar smiling, i mean, he's tougher right now, contrary to the previous version. I definitely think that you should smoothen it, or leave it...no? except from that, thats perfect! just a thought, on blue template, you could win a color, nope? using the blue of gthe shirt. you could add a darker blue to make a shadow on the groun/wall behind, of the char? |
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Kneez on May 21 '10
Looks like Wally doesn't want to be found. I think this is ready to submit.
Any tips for mine http://www.threadless.com/critique/68361/Old_School_Rockers |
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@jebs,
it's a 7 color image, so i've got a color extra if i want. but adding a shade on the floor/wall might be too much i guess. how big should that shadow be, behind him? as tall as Wally? i don't know... might draw away the focus. about his face shade; i can use the brown color for that to smoothe it more, or by adding a darker skin (8th) color to give him the right facial shade instead of harsh black. i'll experiment with it. cheers! |
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Jeiji on May 22 '10
Oh, MAyan! This is a great illustration! I'd want this just for a print or a desktop background, haha. What a great idea!
So sad... but so cute! |
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yup, about the shadow face, obviously, the brown color seems a good idea to me! that is the only thing that bothers me in fact
about the shadow in the back, that was just a try, i think that it could distract, as you said....so, yes behind him, and 2/3 his size, in a color very subtle, close to the background tee...again, that's just a thought, maybe it will be too busy, you could try it in a few seconds, without making a version in WIP...or not try at all! ;-) |
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reworked some linework and added the background shadow for more dept
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to shade or not to shade?
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Great design!
I haven't any preference about the shadow, I think that it works in both images. The background line makes the composition confusing, it looks like he were in a ramp. I think that the garbage is enough to represent the ground. So, no line, no shadow and sub! |
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no shade & no background line?
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yeah, glad you listened to me with the smoothen face ;-)
about the shadow, for me it works better with it BUT, i also agree that the line is not necessary and maybe confusing if you leave the line, the shadow has to be reworked completly by the way. What i think isnalso that you could PLAY with the shadow, don't have the idea yet, but you could give a better( impact with a clever funny shadow... |
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rkotar on May 26 '10
awesome design and idea!
about the shadow i feel like if you do the shadow on waldo then you have to do it all all of the garbage as well. personally i like it w.o the shadow anyway. great idea. and good color choices. and my design is up for scoring! This is the last day! help me out if you have the last time. WOULD BE AWESOME!! |
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matthewcramer on May 26 '10
I definitely think the one with the shadow is better.
check out mine |
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Alaabahattab on May 26 '10
I would go with the shadow
please rate my work: http://threadless.com/submission/275187/Cute_Destruction |
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any more suggestions?
to shade or not to shade? (and remove the background line or not?) |
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try it on an actual t-shirt. maybe then the decision is easier for you. The templates from ninth wheel alway are a nice thing to have.
I think i like the right one more, but its really hard to tell. but with or without - i really like it...funny guy :) btw: Little help on mine would be nice ;) |
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_lillo_ on May 30 '10
It looks better with shadow ;)
nice design |
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roastyjack on May 30 '10
definitely like it with the shadow :D
but right now ur design looks very 2D-ish, I'm not sure if that's the idea ur going for here, but it might look a bit better if u added some depth to the person :) Check out mine too plz! |
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Qxzi on May 31 '10
really nice now, im liking the mc stuff on the floor, thats a really nice touch, I would like to see the design in more detail tho, thought about doing a flash presentation? Nice work tho, really cool!
LAST DAY, please rate! |
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_lillo_ on May 31 '10
It's so nice, submit
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WEAREYAWN on May 31 '10
just saw the whole critique or this for the first time but it seems ready to go to me. the mess on the floor made it so much better from v1 :)
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will also show a bigger picture for the details in the final flash presentation
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with or without, it is good enough so sub :-)
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final version with flash slides...
how about those buttons? don't think i need an adult model slide as well, do i? |
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title: How May I Serve You?
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_lillo_ on Jun 02 '10
Awesome design, other model isn't a bad idea.
Good luck! |
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final version :-)
when nobody is looking, Wally is moonlighting at a restaurant near you... 3 slides : 1 design & 2 models |
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skater05ralph on Jun 03 '10
wow... cool design...
voted for submit!!! ^_^ |
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skater05ralph on Jun 03 '10
wow... cool design...
voted for submit!!! ^_^ http://www.threadless.com/critique/69308/EAT_ME |
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skater05ralph on Jun 03 '10
try also to crit back my design.. ehehe
http://www.threadless.com/critique/69308/EAT_ME |
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when nobody is looking, Wally is moonlighting at a restaurant near you...
let's support this working man :-) he's ready for your vote! |


