when nobody is looking, he is moonlighting at a restaurant near you...

Hmmm add some shading to the shirt, and i agree with marcus. The shirt seems very flat. The left hand seems very floppy and doesnt seem to be his real hand. Nice idea tho! KEEP GOING!

Comment on my new version!

added the collar behind his neck, to get more dept.
added some extra shading on the arms.
also reworked his left hand.

what do you think?

thanks marcuspan...

any other suggestions?
cheers!

oh man, those shoes should have been red indeed!
will change them tomorrow :-)
don't know about the hair (could become a copyright problem when it's exactly the same as the real wally's hair...will look into it)

gave him the proper red shoes and i'm thinking of giving him a red wig on his head...
because i think he can't wear his own hat where he's working.

what do you think?

rework the face I'd say. Its kind of.. flat

ah. and take another color for the shirt.

i can add some shade to the face as i did the rest of the body.

i'm actually looking for a proper background.
to get the "where is wally?" idea more.
any suggestions?

Hahaha This is looking good! However, it may contradict the "Where's Waldo" thing. Well, doesn't matter..this is great


Another Tee color would be nice!

oh and Please rate mine as well :)
http://www.threadless.com/submission/273480/Tangyyy

thinking of giving him a broom instead of his cane, and add some restaurant waste (garbage) on the floor he's working on...

the left hand still seems pretty floppy.

What do you think of my new version?

still have to color all the garbage, but this will be the idea :-)

This is a great style. The garbage is a great idea. The only thing that stands out to me is the blue socks. The extra color is unneeded.

I dont think they are blue socks. Its waldo, and he is hiding, Waldo wears blue pants, which is the color at the bottom. I think I am right anyway. I do like this, and all the junk at the bottom is nice. I dont draw in this style, but i really like it. I want to see it when the garb gets its color.

Check mine please?
That Ain't Mine

elvisshow is right.
the blue aren't socks, the blue color is wally's own blue pants :-)
he's just wearing other shoes, an overall and a pair of gloves.

maybe the title should be: How May I Serve You?
(because of the broom?)

Agreed, add some colour to the garbage and then submit. Nice work.

Also, could you give my latest a quick look if you get a chance? Thanks. Bluetooth

with colored garbage :-)

title: How May I Serve You?
when nobody is looking, he is moonlighting at a restaurant near you...

I love it. It looks great, I would go for it man, i think this might be a winner.

If you dont mind can I get some input on some changes i Have made to mine?

Check mine Please?
That Ain't Mine

nicely done.
nothing major to critique about it :)

check out my design :
beauty of the east
backstabber

@MarcusPan
without the hat? hmm.
i'll look into it, but don't know if it will be right, because he's really recognizable with that hat... he might end up looking like just an ordinairy guy....

yes! ready to submit! I like it!

Please rate & comment the love story of my Zebra
Zebra (zebras are only horses who wear pajamas)

this is cool

can u check out mine?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/67012/Follow_the_Music

Ronald McWaldo yeah! if you like more dramatic then try something with shadows ;-)

what do you think about mine: honey bunny

ahah excellent and winner idea!

i am not sure of you final shadows on his face (on the right), it makes him less stellar smiling, i mean, he's tougher right now, contrary to the previous version. I definitely think that you should smoothen it, or leave it...no?
except from that, thats perfect!

just a thought, on blue template, you could win a color, nope? using the blue of gthe shirt. you could add a darker blue to make a shadow on the groun/wall behind, of the char?

Looks like Wally doesn't want to be found. I think this is ready to submit.

Any tips for mine

http://www.threadless.com/critique/68361/Old_School_Rockers

@jebs,
it's a 7 color image, so i've got a color extra if i want.
but adding a shade on the floor/wall might be too much i guess. how big should that shadow be, behind him? as tall as Wally? i don't know... might draw away the focus.

about his face shade; i can use the brown color for that to smoothe it more, or by adding a darker skin (8th) color to give him the right facial shade instead of harsh black.

i'll experiment with it.
cheers!

Oh, MAyan! This is a great illustration! I'd want this just for a print or a desktop background, haha. What a great idea!
So sad... but so cute!

yup, about the shadow face, obviously, the brown color seems a good idea to me! that is the only thing that bothers me in fact

about the shadow in the back, that was just a try, i think that it could distract, as you said....so, yes behind him, and 2/3 his size, in a color very subtle, close to the background tee...again, that's just a thought, maybe it will be too busy, you could try it in a few seconds, without making a version in WIP...or not try at all! ;-)

reworked some linework and added the background shadow for more dept

any good, or no shadow needed?

...

to shade or not to shade?

Great design!

I haven't any preference about the shadow, I think that it works in both images.
The background line makes the composition confusing, it looks like he were in a ramp. I think that the garbage is enough to represent the ground.

So, no line, no shadow and sub!

no shade & no background line?

yeah, glad you listened to me with the smoothen face ;-)
about the shadow, for me it works better with it BUT, i also agree that the line is not necessary and maybe confusing

if you leave the line, the shadow has to be reworked completly by the way. What i think isnalso that you could PLAY with the shadow, don't have the idea yet, but you could give a better( impact with a clever funny shadow...

awesome design and idea!
about the shadow i feel like if you do the shadow on waldo then you have to do it all all of the garbage as well.
personally i like it w.o the shadow anyway.
great idea. and good color choices.

and my design is up for scoring!
This is the last day! help me out if you have the last time.
WOULD BE AWESOME!!

I definitely think the one with the shadow is better.
check out mine

I would go with the shadow

please rate my work:
http://threadless.com/submission/275187/Cute_Destruction

any more suggestions?

to shade or not to shade?
(and remove the background line or not?)

try it on an actual t-shirt. maybe then the decision is easier for you. The templates from ninth wheel alway are a nice thing to have.
I think i like the right one more, but its really hard to tell. but with or without - i really like it...funny guy :)

btw: Little help on mine would be nice ;)

It looks better with shadow ;)
nice design

all island support is welcome :-)
Walk on Water is up for voting

definitely like it with the shadow :D
but right now ur design looks very 2D-ish, I'm not sure if that's the idea ur going for here, but it might look a bit better if u added some depth to the person :)
Check out mine too plz!

when nobody is looking, Wally is moonlighting at a restaurant near you...


v8:
-without the shadow
-without the background line

really nice now, im liking the mc stuff on the floor, thats a really nice touch, I would like to see the design in more detail tho, thought about doing a flash presentation? Nice work tho, really cool!

LAST DAY, please rate!

It's so nice, submit

just saw the whole critique or this for the first time but it seems ready to go to me. the mess on the floor made it so much better from v1 :)

will also show a bigger picture for the details in the final flash presentation

with or without, it is good enough so sub :-)

final version with flash slides...
how about those buttons?

don't think i need an adult model slide as well, do i?

title: How May I Serve You?

when nobody is looking, Wally is moonlighting at a restaurant near you...

Awesome design, other model isn't a bad idea.
Good luck!

final version :-)

when nobody is looking, Wally is moonlighting at a restaurant near you...

3 slides : 1 design & 2 models

wow... cool design...

voted for submit!!! ^_^

wow... cool design...

voted for submit!!! ^_^

http://www.threadless.com/critique/69308/EAT_ME

try also to crit back my design.. ehehe

http://www.threadless.com/critique/69308/EAT_ME

:-)

woohooo :-)
it's been subbed!

he's ready for your vote!

when nobody is looking, Wally is moonlighting at a restaurant near you...

let's support this working man :-)
he's ready for your vote!

let's support Wally as a working man :-)

he's ready for your vote!

(last half day)