Everyone went to Junior High, everyone tried to draw a "Super S" one day.

Is the text ok ? English is not my native language. Thanks pals!

Sure? Is english correct?

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Looks good, this is really funny. As far as the English goes, it is perfect, except for #4 in the instructions. I'd remove "Delimit," because honestly, I've never heard that word used in conversation.

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is there a word you would use instead?

You could say 'Close off the ends...' . I love the design. It looks awesome :D

Thanks ! I'll use "close off" then.

"Gabled roof" is a phrase better left to Victorian romance novels. I think #2 should read something simple and fun, like "Cap the top and bottom with a tent and a valley".

#4 should just read "close the shape with 2 horizontal lines".

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Wow, I did not experience the Super S at all, but apparently a good number of folks (via informal poll) have! So... nice.

As for the design, it looks pretty great. Maybe a little bigger on the shirt would be nice. I, for one, enjoy the "gabled roof" and "delimit." For me the experience of the shirt is as something alien and bizarre, and the non-conversational vocabulary adds to the feeling of "foreign instruction manual."

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Thank you guys

Rollinkunz, I agree with you, maybe a weird "adult" language fits better
your design is done scoring, but it was pretty good

anything else to change? maybe the P's on "step by step" are to close to D's? what do you think?

Do you people want it bigger on the shirt?

finally a guide to trace the most difficult letter ever!... the only modification i would make is about the size of the design on the shirt, i would enlarge it to cover the most possible space of the shirt front!...

would you mind to critique my design??

http://www.threadless.com/critique/67944/Say_quot_Ah_quot

thanks!

thanks ! I'll enlarge it

I kept the text the way it was. P's at the top are longer. Larger on the shirt. What do you think?

Something to add?

I think there's a bit much going on with the tee, perhaps? It's as if you are referencing the 50's, 80's and 90's all at once? But great concept and artwork :)

this is awesome i remember when this was cool and this shirt is awesome

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So, should I submit it this way?

Does it look cleaner this way?

I remember drawing those stupid things. lol

This looks pretty clean, and rather funny. It is totally a retarded thing, but I might would wear it. Maybe retarded is the the right word, crazy is better!

Keep at it!

lol it still makes me chuckle.

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It does have a slightly cleaner look to it. Last time I saw this, I think I suggested changing the wording on the shirt, but as I look at it again, I think I like the wording as it is.

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i like the color scheme, and the whole idea. what you could impove is the presentation. You should use manos template here : http://www.threadless.com/profile/115982/Manos/blog/331017/Get_your_FLASH_TEMPLATE_here_UPDATE

so that you put the design in a slide, and the mockup, real model on a second slide, big, and juicy ;-)

if you have a second, you could check my WIP: link text

thank you guys

Be proud to be part of that club of cool kids in the school who know how to draw the "Super S".

is it ok?

That's the best I could do to make the flash file fit in 250kb, would you submit it this way?

This seems great for a print, like a poster print. Nice, man! I actually like this idea! I'm not sure how it'd do, but it's kinda' funny.
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Ah, good times.

yeah that's perfect now with the flash template!
just sub it, it's great!

Here we go http://www.threadless.com/submission/274878/How_to_Draw_the_Old_School_quot_Super_S_quot

Thanks for your help!