This could be a good shirt. It's a nice idea. I think if you center the TV, add some glow from it, and make the characters look more frightened it would all turn out great.
i think you should draw it again or trace over it but sharpen the lines and print pictures of these characters faces then trace them so you get it right =)
I would get rid of the text "TV". Also, I don't think you should be able to see jasons full body if he's under the couch. I agree about making freddys face a bit more ghastly looking.
I would still work on freddys face because now it only looks as though he has sunburn and not a ghastly scared and burned face. I would also get rid of the word teletubbies (it's very hard to read)
no text, its better without and just try to make them look more like the actual characters and especially scream and maybe give jason a chainsaw instead, use better proportions and make the bodies more real and all their eyes are really cartoony
I always like to look at other subs and compare it to mine and see how I can improve on it as far as color, composition, or style. Stuff like that. It might help you, too.