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im already thinkin on adding a heart over the mom and the tiger heads...

I really don't get what's going on, you should make the message clearer, use colors and small visual hints.
The upper part of the tree could be a bit smaller.

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The mom is the one the left...

Awesome!!

this is funny! haha. Awesome design!

I love the idea behind this! the artwork is great too! Nice job!

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This is a good idea, at first glance it took me like 15 seconds to figure out exactly what was going on. It kind of feels like everything here is dominant or read visually at once. I would recommend seeing what you could do to make it so we see the baby giraffe first, connect that to two dinosaur parents second, and then see the relationship with the tiger creature 3rd. As it is I kind of bounce around from tiger to dinosaur to what's the giraffe doing.

Great concept though, I think it just needs to be a little clearer.

I agree with m.1 ^ Great concept and artwork though.

Looking great!

ty, what if i change the "?" for a "son?" globe?

I like this, but I find something off about the tree.
Just the part where the cat's sitting.
I can't quite put my finger on it.
But, I enjoy the idea.

The outlines on cheetah and the giraffe seem a little too heavy in contrast with all of their detail. I love the idea and the illustration, but it took me a while to get it too. The "son?" thing might help... or perhaps making the giraffe look more like a baby - as it is now he just looks like a tiny giraffe. This is a great concept though!!

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Like the design. Reckon you could improve the detail of the tree and the cat. other than that it' spot on. Concepts great so good luck.

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This is really cute! The partial black outline on the trees is a bit odd, but other than that, I really like your style.
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lol, nice work. Just, the cat is too much inaccurate for me, maibe you could redo the "legs" to have a nicer cat. Nothing else to say :) is really a nice work and the colors are cool.

cool design

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Hi! Thanks for your comment! I really like your design, it has cool colors. The only thing is that tme message is not so clear, I already haven't reach it at all.. About the way you draw your work I think that all works fine, the only thing I can suggest you is to do the leafs of the trees a little more regular.

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i don't know what's happening, based on the design. but i like the way you drew it. i suggest making the proportions more correct? i don't know if there's a cat twice as big as a giraffe...but if you did that intentionally, then i guess it's ok.

the top right fluff of the tree is very flat at the bottom, maybe make that more curvy? Otherwise awesome. :)

i changed the tree shape, changed the message from the globes, tell me what you think, thank you!

I really like the design and the concept! :D
Text balloons do improve the understandability, but I don't know if their size is big enough to be read from a reasonable distance; just a tiny increase could do the work.
(Also, on a side suggestion, I'm not entirely convinced by the tiger's expression, it seems to me a bit suspicious rather than flirty.)

i like joke with dino and giraffe, who is animal on a branch? i like the expressions of an animal faces especially eyes. maybe you could done better the top three. colors are ok. position on the tee is too high and make it a bit smaller.

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thx for your comments, i'll work on it... :)

I like it. I would make the text balloons bigger, and maybe make the cat's balloon have a question mark and not a heart.

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Heart in Hand

Actually i like it as it is and i think it looks very nice in the yellow tee, i say submit it!...

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Looks ready to me. The concept is very funny and the execution is good :)

Maybe, as mentioned above, I'd just enlarge the balloons a bit to make them more readable.

the tree should look more like this

http://www.jabezposters.com/webapp/repository/product/custom_AfricanTree_36lg.jpg

haha this is an awesome design and well thought out n funny concept.
the only thing that i can see which seems to be mentioned above is the balloons.
Sure bigger balloons might solve the problem.
but maybe change either the color to make them stand out more.
or possibly just change the font you used inside?
all in all great design and concept

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I agree the tree might look better if it was more like the picture - have it flatter. I don't think it needs to go that high up the shirt.
And perhaps eyelashes on the lady dino might be cute... :)

It's a very nice illustration, liking it!

lookin' good! Yeah I think eyelashes on the dino or a cheeky smirk on the cat would be a nice touch.

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i love the idea, i would suggest maybe to separate the pairs from each other

like perhaps put the giraffe and dad on the back? other than that its great haha

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lipstick on the lady dino might work better too

OMG!!! is that who i think it is?.... not

NICELY DRAWN! i agree a lipstick on the lady dino will be GREAT!
goodluck!

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I really like it, my only suggestion would be to have a reddish sun. The sun as it is disappears into the shirt.

i'm anticipating v4.. ur an awesome artist!

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I tried to add some lipstick to the mom, but i already have 8 colors... changed the tree design, mmm.. what else?? oh! also added a little smile to the tiger... i made the balloons bigger... i think that's it! comment please!

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awesome design nice colors and the humor is great too you should submit it :D

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This is really good. Just outline all the tree branches in black all the way and maybe add some bark detail. The tree leaves need another color as an outline or highlight. I like the rest of the design as is, so it does not need much more work.

nice illo! The leaves on the branches cold use some depth, just a little bit of detail they look very flat. The proportions seem off too, between the tree and giraffe and leopard. I don't think you need the heart-bubbles. Tee color works really well though with the blue dinos.

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This is the best version so far. I'd wear it. maybe just out line the rest of it. it's still awesome! I say submit. Check me out: Hey, my eyes are down here

its awesome i think the cartoon humor is great and it doesnt need anymore detail
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I think it would be better without the thought bubbles. The animals' facial expressions are clear enough to tell you what's going on without making it idiot proof.

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I'm OK with Spaux. You can erase bubbles and text.
It's perfect.

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Zebra (zebras are only horses who wear pajamas)

Maybe a different font other than that it great.

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The larger bubbles reallyyy help the design out.
just keeps getting better and better.
the only thing i see now is the outline you have on the trees and the leaves.
maybe continue it all over.
or get rid of it all together instead of just halfway up the branches.
awesome design! cant wait to vote on this

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Very sweet! :D

I might add sweat coming off the cat and a bigger grin on his face.

Sorta like this

That's such a funny concept.

so cute! i love it! submit!

http://www.threadless.com/submission/277296/happy_worst_day_ever

Love this. I think its ready to submit. I think it looks perfect!

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http://www.threadless.com/submission/277104/Life_of_a_city