mmmmmm, infinite donut... aarrghhh

Nice. Simpson's (and most cops') dream!
I like it. The only thing I can come up with is it may not be immediately apparent what it is? I may not have figured it out immediately except of the title. (But that might just be me...)
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Yeah, it actually kind of looks more like a pretzel than a donut. Maybe if it was a little thicker. Or perhaps if you had it sitting in front of a cup of coffee. I really like the concept though.

pretzel? really? I thought the pink frosting and sprinkles would be a dead give away.

maybe there should be a styrofoam cup of coffee and/or a pink donut box to accompany the donut, evoke a stronger connection.

mannn, i was hoping it would work as a standalone piece.

where are the hands that were in the thumbnail? you totally had me there...

Maybe you should add a doughnut box?
Also, have you checked what it would look like without the gaps in between the dough (makes it look like a pretzel).

I dunno, it's just kind of a pretzel-like shape. I can definitely see donut, but I can also see pretzel. Like I said, maybe if you made it a little thicker. You could also try making the unfrosted part a little lighter shade of yellow-brown. Or maybe have a little bit of jelly leaking out somewhere.

I like the direction you're going in with the infinite designs... I have some suggestions that I believe would make this print-worthy.

Firstly, go with the infinite symbol. This let's us all know "This Means Infinite" without having to rely on the title. Remember, people seeing the shirt worn usually won't know the title.

Secondly beef up the donut. Make it look like two donuts combined, like it is in the thumbnail. Load it with frosting and sprinkles and all sorts of goodness.

Lastly... really tiny, add a little kid who's taken a good number of bites out of the donut -- and can not eat anymore because they're full and the donut is still massive. The figure should be big enough to be visible, but small enough to be completely overshadowed by the donut.

haha, thanks for all the suggestions guys. I'll upload a new version this weekend!

2 or 3 colors now, if i go with blue background i might add some 'simpsons clouds' in there

i like the colors in the first version it seems a bit flat now

help me out andplease comment

I like it, but I think you should make the sprinkles some different colors. It'd be more fun =)
That's good work and I like the flat art style.

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I like better the first version.

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I agree that it looks a bit flat and one (or 2) dimensional compared with before. It looks better on white i think as the blue and pink clash

man this is cool add homer hands !!!! liek the gif for the design u can pas copyright like butter soooo add hands plzzzzz

also make it more 3d !! add effects thsi is so flat

I would agree with the comment of adding coloured sprinkes. Prefer the coloured background too.

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I'd add the homer hands like in the thumbnail, and some depth to the donuts. It's kinda flat now. But the idea is awesome.

I think it would be better without the white/blue lines interrupting the donuts' form.. or the donuts should be "baked" that way. not as two real donuts but as one donut-eight.. tasty idea, however ;)

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I like the concept but it agree with holy it seems flat now! Can't wait to see version 3!

If you've got a second I uploaded a new version of my design and would love if you could check it out! http://www.threadless.com/critique/96273/Happiness_is_a_Warm_Gun

nice,and where would that be placed on a tee?

BAH! this crit is back from the dead o_O

should I keep working on it or shoot it in the head with a shotgun?

Cool, I'd like to see tee placement.

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you should keep going, it's a good idea.

It looks a bit flat though...maybe you could put it on a different colored tee, like a light yellow?, but keep the sprinkles white.

I think this is good, but because is so simple you have to really adjust and explore the color possibilities. It has potential, but it needs work. For example, the blue and the brown on the donuts don't work for me, should be more yellow or something to make it pop out of the blue.

You could have infinite amounts of donuts in a shirt too.. Different colors... I don't know. I would explore and explode the idea!!!

Please critique my design! http://www.threadless.com/critique/96451/Rainbow_Kingdom

i like it on the blue bg. it looks more simpsonized than the others.


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