Let me know what you think, and if you could let me know which title you like better "LET THEM EAT PASTE" or "TABLE FOR GLUE"



Thanks

i think table for glue is funnier! but both are good titles.



i would wear this if it didn't have the nose-picking (i mean, it's funny, but just a little gross to me to wear)--but maybe other folks wouldn't have that issue.



i like that she is sitting on a book!

i'm not crazy about the half tone chairs. also, someone just got a design in the running today about eating glue, just as a heads up. totally diff. spin on it tho.

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i believe that i am inlove with everything about this

This is awesome, and let them eat paste makes you think of something more elegant, so its funnier when it goes the other way.

I made some improvements from the last version. Let me know what you think.

personally i preferred the first one . .but this is cool too

v.1 is better. the stippling mixed with solid color blobs is definitely more appealing.

V1 - is my fave...cute idea

i like v1 better too.. this is really cute! i like it.. clever

V1

what about solid colours on a colour t-shirt? I like the expression on the girl's face

i like v1 better too, really funny idea

I say V1, but my sytle is personally a little more 'clean', so I like how v2 is less sketchy. So for me it would be a combo of the two. I get the 'aroma' of the glue, but part of me wants a little to be dripping out or on the table. I mean, it is paste, ha. (And I like Let them eat paste over Table for glue)

I like v2 best. More consistent.

It might be just because I saw that one first, though.

v1

ok wheres my t shirt with this design on? $5

I prefer the second one.

v2 except too much halftone... i like the characters better without the halftone face...



// check out my critique...

i agree with whoever said maybe glue could be dripping down. it is just strange that something iscoming out and up rather than down.

Here is version 3. It looks like most of you liked version 1. I was kind of in between versions 1 and 2 myself so I created a hybrid of the first two versions. Lert me know again which you prefer 1,2, or 3. Thanks.

lot more life to vr. 3

write glue on the glue?



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nose picking like this cute

Hey needs work people, please leave a comment and tell me what you think could use improvement. Thanks

This one seems like the best version so far.

Nice I like it.

definitely good improvements.

ibyes, I like what you have so far, but the reason kids eat paste (as opposed to white glue) is that it is made of wheat and has a smell similar to oatmeal. Most liquid glue products have a flavoring agent that makes ingesting liquid glue unpalatable to little kids.



It would be a little more familiar if instead of the glue bottle, you used wheat paste -- and another hilarious aspect with wheat paste is I have yet to use it with kids without most of it ending up all over except the piece of paper they were intending to paste.

I like the brighter colors and the dripping in this version. Good job.

bump

I still like v2 best, but v3 is definately an improvement to v1.

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nice!

Great Characters! I dont think you need the yellow shape behind the waiter.

I agree with seabass, I'm not sure you need the yellow

I think V3 is the best, because the colors seem to pop a bit more! I love eating paste, thats how I get all my creativity! Would you mind commenting on my critique? http://www.threadless.com/critique/7497/The_Instant_Outlaw

V3!

I would like to see him dishing out paste from a jar, like in Billy Madison when the teacher wipes it on her face.

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