I like it. The reference is a little obscure for those with no taste, but its a good, clean design.
If it had placement, I'd say submit.
I'd really appreciate a critique for 'Space City Invaders' if you have the time. Don't worry about it if you don't. Its on http://www.threadless.com/critique/65643/Space_City_Invaders
...what if he had the same goofy smile as in the movie? Even when he was destroying the city, didn't he have that grin plastered to his face, because that's what he was? Why not when he's about to get drunk?
..what if he had the same goofy smile as in the movie? Even when he was destroying the city, didn't he have that grin plastered to his face, because that's what he was? Why not when he's about to get drunk?
I turned the smile upside down because he is not happy!
Like MeredithSerena said, I would suggest taking out the pink+blue marshmellows. Another thing I would suggest changing is the ribbon on the hat...I think it would fall a little bit differently, but other than that a great and funny design! :)
yeah it worths continuing to work on it, the idea is fun, the reference is pure classic. You said it's a rough, so, i say, let's see, i want to see a V2 ;)
Maybe it could just be the Stay Puft man half submerged in a glass of hot chocolate, instead of his clothes scattered around. Or a giant Stay Puft man battling a giant glass of hot cocoa in a city, that would be hilarious!
@ FalloutGear - somebody directed me towards a submission of a the same concept (SP in a glass), and I don't think the other idea would be obvious enough, but thanks for your input dude! I really appreciate it.
the ellipse on the bottom of the cup is too flat. not sure the logo is necessary. you could soften his eyebrow area by making it a shadowed curve instead of a solid line. get a haircut.
ai agree about the big one, and little normal ones. About copyright, if you cut half, like right now, you won't have any problems, because this shape is not copyrighted.
LMAO!!!!!!!!
this is funny!!!
i love this!
i would also like to see the pun incorporated in the shirt, it's just really funny!!!:)
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yeah, better and better again!
just athought, i liked your transparancy effect at the drink surface...do you have a color left to put it back?
anyway, that rocks!!!!
Quick vector sketch, worth pursuing? Funny? etc