Puft Chocolate™



Quick vector sketch, worth pursuing? Funny? etc

I like it. The reference is a little obscure for those with no taste, but its a good, clean design.



If it had placement, I'd say submit.



I'd really appreciate a critique for 'Space City Invaders' if you have the time. Don't worry about it if you don't. Its on http://www.threadless.com/critique/65643/Space_City_Invaders

thanks lochok - this is far from finished btw, it's pretty rough!

I would like to see a better rendered version and placement before I could say submit.

...what if he had the same goofy smile as in the movie? Even when he was destroying the city, didn't he have that grin plastered to his face, because that's what he was? Why not when he's about to get drunk?

This is funny, I would take out the pink and blue marshmallows cuz he didn't have any of that color on him.

great idea! maybe put the blue cloth on the glass...

Please if you have time, help me with this... DRACULA GOES SCARY.

thanks!

..what if he had the same goofy smile as in the movie? Even when he was destroying the city, didn't he have that grin plastered to his face, because that's what he was? Why not when he's about to get drunk?



I turned the smile upside down because he is not happy!

what? are you saying you're not happy when you're about to get drunk???

Like MeredithSerena said, I would suggest taking out the pink+blue marshmellows. Another thing I would suggest changing is the ribbon on the hat...I think it would fall a little bit differently, but other than that a great and funny design! :)



If you have time, please critique me~

http://www.threadless.com/critique/66366/Land_of_the_Rising_Sun

cool idea ! try with more details, and change the color of the brown line maybe try the darker brown ;)



Fix the perspective hat, he look just pasted on it.



Feel free to Comment/vote mine :)

I say pursure this idea, It's clever :)

I'll watch this to see how it develops

Cool idea. One question. Why is the face in the hot choc? Should'nt it be part of the marshmallows?

nice design, but the tissue look like some bow tie.

Hahaha, it's not a tissue, it's a neck tie! Classic

yeah it worths continuing to work on it, the idea is fun, the reference is pure classic. You said it's a rough, so, i say, let's see, i want to see a V2 ;)

Maybe it could just be the Stay Puft man half submerged in a glass of hot chocolate, instead of his clothes scattered around. Or a giant Stay Puft man battling a giant glass of hot cocoa in a city, that would be hilarious!



Can you check out my new version?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/66324/Kumquat_Squat#v4

@ FalloutGear - somebody directed me towards a submission of a the same concept (SP in a glass), and I don't think the other idea would be obvious enough, but thanks for your input dude! I really appreciate it.

Great concept!! I can't wait to see round two. Definitely pursue it!

Update. STILL UNFINISHED.

the ellipse on the bottom of the cup is too flat. not sure the logo is necessary. you could soften his eyebrow area by making it a shadowed curve instead of a solid line. get a haircut.

mug looks much better. maybe the hot chocolate is a little dark, and i dunno if you need to see the frown when it's submerged.

Isn't the logo copyrighted?

what about just one marshmallow with the hat and ascot (maybe even without the face)?

yeah, of course the logo is copyrighted, but I can get round it by either significantly changing the logo, or cutting it in half. That's still a WIP.



Also, I like your idea ryan

But, who has one marshmallow in their hot chocolate?? Maybe one big one and a few smaller ones?

i like the idea, but yes, i think u shoud get the big one (not cut into pieces)... and maybe adding little ones but normal marshmallows....



check mine

one big marshmallow and then some melted marshmallow-y pieces?

ai agree about the big one, and little normal ones. About copyright, if you cut half, like right now, you won't have any problems, because this shape is not copyrighted.



keep it up

Entirely new mug version.

That mug looks ace!



I still think the no-face marshmallow is the way to go, but if you want to do the with-face version it's your design and your decision.

hahahaha

I really think the face adds extra lols Ryan, but I understand what you're saying!



V4 coming up with a combination of V2 & 3

Ready to go?

The image looks great!
Could the placement be slightly bigger?

Just a suggestion, I've been getting crappy scores recently, so don't listen too carefully!

The image looks great!

Could the placement be slightly bigger? Just a suggestion as I've been getting crappy scores recently.

looks like it to me...

all your wishes are my command - this is the version I'm submitting. :)

Now with a little steam!

LMAO!!!!!!!!
this is funny!!!
i love this!
i would also like to see the pun incorporated in the shirt, it's just really funny!!!:)
Please help me out and rate mine:)
Owl Commando

yeah, better and better again!
just athought, i liked your transparancy effect at the drink surface...do you have a color left to put it back?
anyway, that rocks!!!!

Sadly I had to cut that colour out Jebs cos I reached 8 already....BUT I sneakily added a 9th anyway with the steam colour,, OOPS :P

ahah :-)
anyway, you can use the shadow blue for the steam, at least try and sneakily add the 9th for trasnparency arf arf gnarf

WOW!! This truly is awsome!! Id buy it!

This is my design! :)

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I had to change a few things, but this is definitely definitely the final version

looking good.

amazing!

2 X don't submit? wow, thanks whoever you are! Not to be modest, but I'm interested as to why you'd say not to submit this.

there is a little rough line at the edge of the cup i would fix before submitting

but overall nice

wasn't me, but don't you need the shirt placement? or is it flash and mine is not working or something?

I also agree with the little edge there by the logo on the mug, it looks rough.

Saw this on Emptees - amazing to see the process. Who knew people still used the critique section?

I'd prefer a larger placement on the tee versus the placement used on the previous versions. Awesome work!

Dammit! I meant to fix that little rough edge, and forgot ACK!

Anyhow, thanks everyone, really appreciate the help

looks good but i agree about the edge

http://www.threadless.com/critique/66822/need_some_opinions#lastcomment

Yeah, OK fixed

YEAH! that's ready o sub in my opinion...
but you want an advice?

Presentation is still something you can improve here, wit ha Flash Template...do you have Flash program?

Because you could use the First Frame to the design, the second for a fun powerful presentation for example...?

http://www.threadless.com/profile/115982/Manos/blog/331017/Get_your_FLASH_TEMPLATE_here_UPDATE

and

http://www.threadless.com/profile/267872/pilihp/blog/569400/NOW_with_2_FLASH_Templates

and CONGRATS for Krusty!!!! I hope you'll be printed ^^

yeah, i normally use flash, but I couldn't be bothered this time Jebs. thanks for your suggestions!

Very clever, nicely drawn, should vote highly, nice job.

print it!!!

What do you think of mine?

It looks good although the angle of the mug slightly disturbs me!

HIt me up. Mine is being scored: Basebrawl

still scoring!