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v1 Ball Bath [working title], 1747 days ago, click to expand
v2 Ball Bath [working title], 1746 days ago, click to expand
v3 Ball Bath [working title], 1746 days ago, click to expand
v4 Ball Bath [working title], 1746 days ago, click to expand
v5 Ball Bath [working title], current version








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fatheed
   fatheed on Aug 19 '07
Now with balls. This is just a rough version.
sillybanana
sillybanana on Aug 19 '07
Your balls are nice ( yeah that just sounded all kinds of innapropriate)

Something is bothering me about her calf behind her knee, I thought maybe it wouldn't be obvious once the balls were in so i didn't say anything before but it looks like her calf is wider than it should be and the thigh has the illusion of being a lot slimmer than the calf. ( only on the leg in the air.) I hope that isn't too hard to change at this point.
sometimessane
sometimessane on Aug 19 '07
i think you need to make her left arm rest on the side as well. i'm pretty sure she's getting up to something under all those balls.
jklarson66
jklarson66 on Aug 19 '07
I agree about the leg, it should taper back to a point just below the knee and then open up fuller into the thigh. Aside from that I see that you're out of colors but maybe a little halftone shading would help if it can be accomplished. And leave her left arm where it is. It's nobody's business what it's up to.
fatheed
   fatheed on Aug 19 '07
Thanks guys. Its a very rough job at the mo, but I might just leave this one... ;-)



I have other ideas.
SourBitch
SourBitch on Aug 19 '07
this is so rad
peterpansyndrome
peterpansyndrome on Aug 19 '07
i agree she needs another arm
theSeventhSon
theSeventhSon on Aug 20 '07
Her left hand should be resting on the side of the tub. If I were taking a picture of this, that's how I'd pose her.

I love where this is heading. Keep it up. I see a great shirt in the works here.
SEVEN-HUNDRED
SEVEN-HUNDRED on Aug 20 '07
I really like this, tho i agree with the comment way way up about there being a cute little puppy with one of the balls in its mouth, slavering all over it.
Hero Status
Hero Status on Aug 20 '07
the balls nothaving an outline while the rest of the piece does kinda bothers me, but that might just be me. idk.

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8 days later
briligg
briligg on Aug 28 '07
I don't think the glass of wine is necessary. It distracts.

I wouldn't put so much detail in the feet of the tub, at least not in black. Maybe you can do it in the flesh tone and make it less linear so it is less prominent.

I'd search for more harmonious colours for the balls, and I think I'd make their highlights larger.
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