I'm trying to branch out from robots, which is fitting for this design. Yuk yuk. Regardless, I think this one's special.

bumpo!

Wow! I love it!!!!! How about having a little plant that the robot's busy watering? I think the plants need a bit of green at the bottom as well to balance it. Conceptually, I think it might be nice as well. I want one of these robots!



If you have time, please vote for my design:

If you have time, please check out my design and vote

http://www.threadless.com/submission/266306/rough_amp_green

Nice! Nothing more to add or change, just submit this :)



Can u check mine too?

any comment?

I agree with taxiqueen of having a little plant that the robot's busy watering, and I feel something should be done on trees and the way it is coming out from the robot.



Can you see mine?

Drying_leaf

In the story in my head, the robot is no longer alive (as opposed to Johnny 5, of course, who is alive), so I don't want it to look like he actively is watering anything. I'm gonna have to think about this one...



Any idea, @addu, what should be done to the trees?

i'd play more with a bit of shadows against the robot so they aren't floating over the robot

I think shadows would make the branches too realistic- I was going for an abstract thing here- like the branches aren't necessarily branches, but maybe a blue sky or some other picture within the branches...

Maybe the trees should be pointing up instead of at an angle?



I like the colours you have used.



Nipple Twister

Thanks for the comments folks. I think shadows would make the branches too realistic- I was going for an abstract thing here- like the branches aren't necessarily branches, but maybe a blue sky or some other picture within the branches...

Thanks for great feedback. IT made me go back and revisit a design I really thought was done, and now I like it even better. What say ye?

i prefer this one... but i wanna see the background better but can't... maybee bring it up a notch...



Check mine out if you can:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/65840/Y_i_love_my_Doggy#v2

http://www.threadless.com/critique/65842/Let_go#v2

Definitely the best version. I'd say it's ready. I had an idea similar to this, but with a bulldozer instead of a robot... needless to say I'm going to scrap that cuz this is WAY better than anything I could do.



Nice work!

Awesome!!! Submit, I'd say!! :-D

Beautiful!

this is amazing!



Check mine:

Chosen

I have nothing to say, except, realy good work, i like it,

submit it



could you visit mine, thanks

A bit more texture to the leaves and a new presentation format...



Thanks again, folks, for all the great feedback. : )

I'm trying to branch out from robots, which is fitting for this design. Yuk yuk. Regardless, I think this one's special.

Sorry for re-subs of similar versions- I think I figured out how to make the clouds less red in the jpeg conversions- anyways, I'll sub this one tomorrow after a good night's sleep gives me afresh eye. Thanks again for the feedback.

Subbed... Thanks folks, especially taxiqueen, bandd , addu for such helpful feedback.

very good idea!

I know it's in, but this is amazing



if you get time

http://www.threadless.com/critique/65851/analogue_heaven

Looks good!

Nice combination of textures. I don't wear much black, but I'd still consider buying it!