SHOULD I MAKE THE MOTHER???

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I think it's good without the mother.

I'd say add the mother. People kind of expect to see a mother duck in a front of a train of ducklings, so it could make the Peep at the end more of a surprise.

I say don't make the one right before the peep see-thru. I also say to try it with the mother.

meredith - the one duck isnt going to be outlined. its not finished hes gonna be just like the rest!

I think the rubber duck at the end should be a little bit clearer, also duck 2 is very long compared to his brother and/or sister :)



Any suggestions?

maybe hint at some ripples in the water ever so slightly?

oooh doi, I didnt know that. :P Um, I'd say make the momma.

Yeap, they need a mother. And I only realized it was a rubber duck at the end because of pygent's comment, so.. I think it needs some work.

I really like their face expressions :)



Could you please check my design? :)

I am a fan of this :O)

Haha fantastic! Will be keeping an eye on this one. No need for the mother but I'd like to see how you incorporate her without taking too much focus off the peep. Probably have her looking back noticing something isn't quite right like the duckling in front of peep.

Please help crit Brotisserie