Hello,

Any Ideas here?

And a cool title

thanks

Fly a-whale? Sorry, I'm not good with this, english is not my language.

Nice piece! I suggest making the clouds different, and maybe a tad more of contrast.

Keep it up!

I love the idea, but yeah maybe choose a diff background, not too diff though....It just feels ike the dude pops out a bit much compared to the clouds/whale... but still I would wear fo sho haha

"Up, up and a whale!"

You can use that.

Now go critique mine please!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/65202/Got_ma_hoes

yeah! thanks, the idea is about a man's journey



The guy's photo is from The Commons, I feel that I'm missing something here....



Thanks

bump!

This is awesome!! and I like "Up, Up and a Whale"! good one Foul Ole Ron!!



Please check out my critique :)

Jess xThe Music Man

Up, Up and a Whale, two votes here,

What about comments to improve this



Thanks (gracias)

I think you should make the whale at least a little bigger. It looks a bit too small, ya know? Also... I don't know... Dreamscape. That seems to suit it. And is actually kind of the type of dream I would have. Smiley face.



If you could, might you...?



http://www.threadless.com/critique/50342/Melting_Crayons#v6

truebenson

love this but i agree. change the shirt color but not to much.

plz critique mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/65382/African_Pilgrimage

up up and a whale...lol!!! go with it!

Please rate my design- Samurhino Dusk

I want it to keep it simple, I made some changes,

please comment,



about the title: "up up and a whale" any other?



Thanks

"where the whale thing are" hohohohoohh sorry my sense of humor is a little bit simple, or maybe dumb in this part of the day hohoohohohoh



i think you should use something like pretty big and rare tittle like lemony snikets a series of unfortunate events

why don you tint the character to a darker blue instead of the black color ???

good luck

having a whale of a time? lol



up,up and a whale sounds pretty good though :)

hahaha Nice Titles, love I love bouth,

thanks guys,



about the characters color, it's black

What about Real White Thread on the white lines..... just an idea

bump

bump

I think this design is excellent.

thanks, any other comment?

maybe call it around the world??



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thanks,

About colors, placement, etc?

Title?

I don't think that there should be smaller whales and fish in the background, just clouds. That begin said, I feel like the size relationship between the man and the whale is too similar. Maybe try making the man a bit smaller, or the whale a bit bigger. Other than that, I really like it.



By the way, "Up, Up, and a Whale" is great. And as I was typing "by the way," I almost typed "By the Whale." That might work as well?

ok then,

thanks sam for the backfeed, I will make some changes



Any other?

A Whale of a Tale



I'm Whaling Away



Hot Air Baleen

oh come on, those are the best titles ever!

:p

DEF UP UP AND A WHALE! brilliant, love this!



( please check out mine... http://www.threadless.com/critique/64979/Butterfly_Kaliedoscope )

(and i like the fish mixed in with the clouds...) submit! can totally see this getting printed!

the one thing i would say, is maybe that the contract between the background and the whale/fish/clouds could be slightly more distinct, but that is a little comment...

contrast*



sorry, it's late, i should go to bed!

haha, thanks for all the funny and cleaver Titles guys,



"Up up and a whale" (Foul Ole Ron) , still have it crown.... everybody seems to like it.



mmmhhh.... so you like the fish/clouds mix,



So, with or with out flyinf fish around

bump

Whale Tale ?



Please help me out: Frog with a coconut

NICE

any other comment guys?

Whale Tale is cool. it rhymes and easy to remember.

Seems like an original play of noah and the whale story! Not in it, but under it!

Brill!

This is my design! :)

i cant help with the name...but i like this art

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