Hey - just an idea I had about the Rapunzel hair-climbing being a really good idea on paper, but actually just being painful. The text is temporary, but I just want to see if the idea is any good.

hahah, that would hurt, wouldn't it?



i would wear a shirt that had shit on it. would threadless print it?



keep going, i wanna see some colours

looks good so far, i'd like it if the text remain 'pasted' on like a cutout.

I'm going to crack on and submit a version 2 then see what people think

I agree that the drawing should look as realistic as it does now with the comic style text you have now. Maybe have the hair REALLY long so the guy is climbing from the bottom of the shirt and Rapunzel is right at the top. Please leave some suggestions on my critique. I scratch your back... you scratch mine wink wink, nudge nudge.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/643/They_Called_It_Social_Science

idk....i think it would be better without the text. otherwise i like the idea.

I think not text would be better, too. Enough agony on her face would convey the message just fine.

Could be lots of fun! Looking forward to it.

You are a good drawerererer.

maybe symbols "%@!*" instead of words . Now that'd be pretty funny. Nice drawing though.

Good idea, and some good suggestions here, too. I would've had the poor thing lying crumpled on the ground with the prince still holding her braid with a "wow, that didn't work at all" expression on his face. I don't think that would see on here, though.

-^o = prince in the middle of pulling on her hair saying, " oops ! "

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i think you should make it be her beard hair that he's climbing up



and he's just realise and is almost letting go from shock

*realised

Sorry, I screwed up on my previous post. Here's what I was

trying to show you :



If you're still brainstorming around this idea, could

we see what it would look like if the prince accidentally

pulled her out of the window by her long hair?



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Awesome idea phones ! ! :)

or 3 side by side

Just though I'd post what I have so far. The wording is still far from decided, so any suggestions will be appreciated. Let me know what you think. Thanks.

looking great. I think you should have more of the wall drawn in like the sketch!

Hey, now everyone across the Atlantic is awake, I wondered what you thought and where I should go with it. Cheers.

I need to know what you chaps think. I'm stallin', baby!

I still need your help/thoughts.

I like "Get a ladder." I also liked how you had more of the wall shown in the sketch. Could you try it on some different color backgrounds? The green is fine, but I was just wondering how it would look on another color.

Know what might be really funny? She's got scissors out and saying something like "use the door!"

Let's see of that brick work in there.

i dont know, how about her looking at him when she is talking instead of into nothingness, i also think the hair should trail off the shirt

also, she is holding a man with the power of her neck, make it look like it

i think some swearing would really make it funny... just cuz its a kids story and you wouldnt imagine her saying 'fuck' or anything... but i doubt it would get printed then... i love the idea

oh yeah like fishfish said, eyes need to be looking down

maybe have her neck twisted appropriately with the pull of the guy

the placement needs to be on the right side, that gives it depth

i'm not really liking it on a green shirt, it makes her remind me too much of the hulk/princess fiona from shrek

joshhupp's idea is really funny, like she is threatening him with the scissors right next to her hair and saying "use the door!", that's hilarious. have her look at the guy, not up at the sky. and draw more of the building.

I like "get a ladder" but not crazy about the green skin and the choppy edging

thanks guys. I'll revisit this idea soon, after having taken a break from it, and I'll try to apply some of your ideas.

looking good! I agree with everyone else about the neck and the eyes, oh and it really needs to show pain and effort cause that for sure would hurt as hell.



Looking forward to see the final result!!!

I think the placement would be better on the other side of the shirt...



mostly because I think the word bubble is one of the most important things the eye should see, and it would be easier if it was toward the middle of the shirt.



Also... the princess is looking toward the left... and there is like a rule that says the design should be on the right if the main person is looking ot the left... (does that make sense? sorry)

I think you should fix the expression on her face so that she actually looks in pain. It's weird how she's looking off to the left.

dude this is hillarious. i liked the fact that she was cursing because shes supposed to be such an elegant creature.. like you wouldnt want your princess going around saying shit



maybe you could have say get a damn ladder



i dunno.. i thikn the swearing is funny. and i agree with the previous post, her facial expression just looks like shes yelling.. she needs to be more angry or in pain



i would totally buy it though if it gets chosen.



i dont quite know how i feel about the placement..

"Stop pulling my hair" or how about her with scissors in her hand ready to cut it off...?

Nice Idea... I'm eager to see the next version. Agreeing to the following: More bricks in the wall, more expression in her face and no shrek-green faces :)



Don't relly like the Ladder text... More anger. Maybe you can view the open door at the bottom of the wall which means the "hero" choose to climb her hair anyway... (All the books tells him he is supposed to climb the hair...) Maybe you can have him say "I'm sorry love, but the book told me to..."

im diggin it.. eagar to see what comes next

you can't really see pain in her face

plus, there's the shadow of her hair on the castle, but there's no shadow on her dress

"plus, there's the shadow of her hair on the castle, but there's no shadow on her dress"



The light is on the left side of the design, making the hero and the hair cast a shadow... The dresses shadow would be placed inside the castle.

no i mean the shadow of the hair should be on the dress

I know what you mean. I have quite a way to go on this one, but its been demoted for a while. In the time being, keep the dream alive by giving my latest sub five dollars :) Love you x

I like the color, but I dont like the text on this one.



It does need to be placed on the right side.

Yey fatheed your links works :)



I've already $5 that submission... Now I want to see some new stuff :) I'm waiting to see v3. I know it's going to be a good one. :)

great concept

It looks good.. but I don't think her facial expression "says it all". Wider eyes and her eyebrows angled would bring more indication of pain. If you look at it as it is now, she looks more like she's singing.