A simple design is a welcome change. I like this as is and consider it ready to sub, but future me often sees things I don't. Please help me bridge the gap between now and then. Is this design ready to go?

It is really cute, but I don't get it. Probably cuz im dumb but i love your style and think it is pretty good to go

hmmm What if the title was "Mystery Meat"? Would that make the story clearer?

is he looking at his hands? or throwing them up in confusion?

Hmm. Supposed to be examining his hands. Like it's an identity crisis... Unclear, huh?

lol, "why am I here?" I get it. I would wear that shirt. Good job.

the one thing I might say is that I think it's really funny because of the title, which you wouldn't know if you just saw the shirt, so maybe you could put a copy of walden on the ground next to him or something.

subbed! thanks, folks

oops- i meant to type that in my other critique! This one obviously needs a lot of work to deliver the punchline... I like the copy of Walden on the ground. Maybe a magazine, too, whose cover story is an expose on how hot dog meat has mysterious origins.