whats up guys im here asking your opinion on this design has nothing to do whit holiness , is just that i like pickles and i found some kind of humor on make a t shirt for this hamburger's fellows and honor them.



the first is a holy pickle and the second one well i thinks is pretty obviuos see ya and im waiting for some critiques

whats up guys im here asking your opinion on this design has nothing to do whit holiness , is just that i like pickles and i found some kind of humor on make a t shirt for this hamburger's fellows and honor them.





the first is a holy pickle and the second one well i thinks is pretty obviuos see ya and im waiting for some critiques

Ummm...

I like your style a lot. I get teh references but I still don't really get it. As an illistration: its good, its interesting. As a design: You may have some trouble selling it because it is very different.

You should probably get another opinion because I'm no expert

i like your opinion yes dosent have some kind of justification just made it for personal interest hope somebody finds it nice enough to put it on a t shirt hohoohoho thanks for the comment

Work on the glass and title.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/64210/My_Girl

loolll niice ! love it ! :)



just add some details.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/64212/Open_to_me

Losing the yellow on the bottom would make it more Aesthetically pleasing, otherwise I see this illustration moving on.



Check mine out, tell me what you think!

I really like this, but i think that a change from harry pickles to something else would be a good move, i like the color in the second but do like the concept of the first more.



Would you look at mine?



Ochikubo

hey guys thanks to all for the comments i think im goint to work on the glasses of this version and put more color for the first one look how turn out the both

Awsome design. I like the style. Harry Pickle made me laugh. Let's see it on a shirt.

thanks michaelhee

nicce i like 2 see it on a shirt

plz check mine

http://www.threadless.com/critique/59822/just_out_4_sun_cream

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like this!

this is a cute idea. I like the sketch feel but I think in order to get this to work at its full potential you need to marry it more to the harry potter style. take a look at the film posters or dvd covers and use the color themes that they do. that will help sell the idea the minute it is viewed and there for strengthen the joke. Keep it up you are on good path

The idea is very good, I would like to see it in the vest.



Mine

this is a little re-design based in your comments hope im going in the right direction

in the little title says "and the pattys of tomorrow" im not sure of this sentence its ok because my english isnt pretty good please speak your mind about it too thanks again

style is pretty cool, but all the B n W mashes together, maybe some more color? also...Harry Pickles?......dunno dude...

I'd rather you try something more original with your cool art style.

yes i know im not convinced by the harry pickles either maybe im going to try it whit the saint pickle stuff i know that my design donst have something logical behind it besides my taste for pickles



thanks for the comment

I like this, but the scar on the pickle's forehead should be a shade of green so it's more like a scar (look at pics of harry's scar). Also, just leave it as 'Harry Pickles' without the pattys of tomorrow. (btw it's patties ;))

ne gustaba muchisimo mas en la version dos amigo! y para mi gusto no necesita el texto, pero esta chido!

thank you very much jojojojo gracias carnal tons que la subo ya asi ?? como la segunda ??

Yeah i agree with Oinko. I think all three of your versions are designed really well and look cool, its just the idea thats not doing it for me. I think it is ironic and funny, but i can't see it as a winner. But like I said I think your art style works very well and the design looks good



take a look at mine



http://www.threadless.com/critique/64126/The_Perfect_Pair

whats up guys im here asking your opinion on this design has nothing to do whit holiness , is just that i like pickles and i found some kind of humor on make a t shirt for this hamburger's fellows and honor them.





the first is a holy pickle and the second one well i thinks is pretty obviuos see ya and im waiting for some critiques

this my last attempt to get your approval guys hohohohohoho this one is the last design on a tshirt

I'll second Oinko's suggestion for more color -- what about filling in the ketchup and mustard bottles?



I miss his glasses! Even if Harry's a pickle, he's not Harry without his glasses.

not quite sure about the title on the shirt but i really dig your drawing style, man keep that style for some

more submissions !!!!

yeah and Check this one

Remove the text. Design looks great without all this words.

nice design!

I will make more visible the thunders, ...maybe yellow



http://www.threadless.com/critique/64243/arrow_target

http://www.threadless.com/critique/64182/tomato_sauce_or_mafia_mess

Yeah better and better, really nice idea. I don't what could be better. Perhaps by moving the text down (or not).

I agree with prosto that it may look cleaner without the text. The illustration is so great it doesn't need it!

please critique mine

http://www.threadless.com/critique/64254/Warm_Welcome

I agree with prosto that it may look cleaner without the text. The illustration is so great it doesn't need it!

please critique mine

http://www.threadless.com/critique/64254/Warm_Welcome

hey thanks for the advice guys i will put a little bit more color and remove the text see yaaaaa

i second the idea ! more colors, less text ! :) look very cool !



http://www.threadless.com/critique/64212/Open_to_me

I think the ketchup and the mustard need to switch bottles and I love harry potter. What a great idea!

so this is the new one whit a little bit more color hope you like it see yaaa

funny design, but i thinks it still needs some changes.

i'd remove the lightingbolt on his 'forehead' and clean up the shading of the ketchup bottle. the lines in the big lightningbolts (left, right and bottom) need to be more equally placed and the shade on the cape could be a bit bigger and darker.

good luck with further changes :D

cheers!

haha its pretty funny, i feel the shading could be done a little better it just makes the colors look bland and plain, posibbly shade with darker colors of green and red etc. great idea.

I agree, maybe darker colors for the shading could help or even more color in the lightning bolts. I like the yellow ones in an earlier version.

I like the idea... it's funny and all... but why is he a saint? and why does it look like Harry potter...



I think if you cleaned this up a bit you'd have something going on... I agree the lightning bolts in the background look to haphazard and are detracting from the overall picture...





Some more vibrant colors and you could be on to something here!





Chicken Ver.3



Zombie Jesus

Pretty nice, I prefere the "saint pickles" one, rather than "harry pickles".



I liked the idea of the shield in the first version. but the mustard and ketchup were nice additions



I'd change the color of the black lightingbolts, since they look like arms and a tail (same color line as the pickle), but that might be just me.

sweeeeeet. maybe color in the ketchup and mustard bottles

A mil me gusta esta version y la dos amigo!

y me gusta como lo tienes ahorita sin tanto color en as botellas, pues asi le das mas importancia al personaje principal y se ve chido el detalle

this is the last stuff ill put around maybe just for a while let me know what you think guys see yaaaaa

im thinking in put some ink foil in the mustard and ketchup and in the shadows what do you think guys

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ink foil sounds like a neat idea. I love the design

My, I really like the first version! They're all great though. Perhaps put the shield back, or take out the glasses? You've probably been having people tell you the opposite though.



Would you care to tell which version you like? (If any! )



http://www.threadless.com/critique/64593/Maiden_China

I really like this. It looks like it's almost there. What if you vary the thickness of some of your shading lines just a little bit more? Like if the lines on the mustard that are closest to the pickle are a little darker (or much closer together) it will give the mustard a little more shadow and dimension. Nice work!



Please let me know what you think of mine:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/64752/The_Hitchhikers

this is grand

Looks good enough to eat;)



please enter my design and vote for me!:)

Jiujitsu Crazy

I still feel like the lightning bolts in the background are too jumbled... I'd try something a bit more universal....







Zombie Jesus Ver.5