Draft 1. I wanted to add more of the characters, but I think the core cast of force powered folks told enough of the story.

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Draft 2. I wanted to add more of the characters, but I think the core cast of force powered folks told enough of the story.

haha! cool idea

love this

Thanks! There's also a spoiler on the emperor's chair, I'm surprised Vader never noticed.

Very good idea, probably you should put some small drawings like hieroglyph below.

Draft 1. I wanted to add more of the characters, but I think the core cast of force powered folks told enough of the story.

Added multiple faction symbols and icons, as well as a preloader. :)

vote, anything to critique?

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2 don't submits, can I get a critique, even if it's just your reason you would never wear this on a shirt?

I'm sure... it's a rough line with parody, and this is essentially a retelling of Empire... but I hope it's at least a fun design. :D

i think the shirt color needs to be a beige or tan or creme or a yellow or some "rock wall color"

also, it'd be cool if thre was a lot more going on, like multiple frames, or other characters jumbled in.

The idea began as a full retelling of "A New Hope" but I thought that would be too cumbersome as a shirt design... maybe I can sprinkle in some of the B story beneath the gold icons.

I think the design could wrap all the way around the shirt, telling a bit of the story of each one of the movies. Also, the Emperor looks like he is leaning backwards a little here. I would straighten his back, not that posture is his strong suit. Nice concept though. If you get a chance,



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