Two options. Which is best?

Hilarious! I like the bottom design better. Great concept!



If you get a second would you please critique my newest idea.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/63304/Damn_you_Scuba_Steve

cool, thanks buddy. Trying a 3D version too.

still rough, just the idea

note: this is only to give the perspective. Lots of stuff needs working on

Two options. Which is best?

V3 is best. Perspective still needs a little work and maybe some 'context' but a great idea.

looking good. i think the back sides of the @s need to come down a little to fix the perspective.

Great idea, but others agree with the perspective of the "@" needs work.

please critique my design ...

InVader

V3 is much better. I hate to repeat other critiques, but I agree that the back sides of the @s seem a little too high so it throws the perspective off a little.



If you get a second could you critique the new versions of my designs please!



http://www.threadless.com/critique/63199/Corporate_Robot



http://www.threadless.com/critique/63304/Damn_you_Scuba_Steve#v2

i like the background from the first ones though. but the 3-D version is much better.



if you have a chance:



http://www.threadless.com/critique/63340/American_Idle_the_good_ol_days

Just fixing the perspective now. What's the consensus on backgrounds? Does it need one? Perhaps a simple wireframe deathstar?

wireframe planet surface, possible with other @@'s behind.

I know people warned against making over complicated, but like someone said above I think it needs some context. I don't think this is overkill. Perhaps I could work on the background a bit more, but I prefer something there. Thoughts?

?

it looks really good staff! nice 3d take on it! i think its ready to sub. nice and easy.



peep out my panda on the moon in my critiques!

sub it, looks great.... I'd buy it!

while the death star is nice, it may put it over the top for the copyright issue. I think threadless is very cautious with star wars stuff after luscasarts came after threadless for glennz dark side of the garden.

not done yet! I want to add an extra level of highlights and sort out some shadowing/positioning issues first :)

The @s look much better on this version. If threadless has any concerns about the copyright issues they'll let you know when you try to submit it. You can always take it out if they do and then resubmit.



If you get a second could you critique the new versions of my designs please! I'm having a hard time getting any feedback so I would really appreciate it.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/63199/Corporate_Robot



http://www.threadless.com/critique/63304/Damn_you_Scuba_Steve

Couple more versions with a different background now. Added more details and highlights too.

Top version. Love this, dude!

cool, that's the one I'm leaning towards too. Thanks nathan!

Ok, am I there?

the only thing i'm not crazy about is how smooth the curves are on the mountains in the background (i assume they're mountains?). they seem to clash a bit with the nice rigidness of the at-at.

easily fixed my friend

Changed shirt colour, tweaked the mountains and fixed the main guns too cos they were pissing me off.

this version looks like the final!! nice.

there it is! perfect!

Quality!

yay! for anyone who comes across this, I've submitted it to woot first and foremost. will give anyone the heads up if they choose it there

:D awesome!

Simply Awesome...........



check mine plz

here too

it's pretty great...

oh how i lol'ed...

thanks thanks! my worry is that a lot of people don't know these things are called AT-ATs

This shirt rocks! I know what its called and its pretty clever. Nicely executed too.

I didn't know how those things were called but learned as I saw it.

Very funny and well done!!!

if this get's rejected, what can I change? I really hope it's ok, I don't want to have to change anything drastically...

Like the progression to final piece!! It's strong colors are cool could also try mainstream version - moon white, grey @@ and black tee.

Please have a look at me and provide a critique - cheers!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/63825/BORN_FREE

Somebody has just made me aware that am AT-AT is shown wandering Endor in the movie, so that justifies it not having to appear on a light blue tee (representing hoth).



Sweet!!

So woot want to print my design, but they say I have to remove the death star from the background. Slightly annoying, but at least I don't have to change the ATAT itself. What do people suggest I do? I want something else star wars themed, but has to be ambiguous, do you think a moon would suffice? Halp!

I've just stumbled in and I am one that doesn't get the reference however as a graphic it got my attention and looks great. I would compliment any guy wearing it and then strike up a conversation no doubt!

Haha, that's great, for yourself and anyone who doesn't get the reference, the robot's are referred to as AT-ATs (which stands for All Terrain Armoured Transport).



And obviously @ = at

Love that! Some good improvement in a little time, I guess it is perfect now.

Woot want to print your design? They have licence for Star Wars stuff? how to contact?

Would you think they'd be interested in printing this?

A link to the modified image.



http://img30.imageshack.us/img30/3188/gdfge.jpg



@hm087ster - woot don't have a licence for star wars stuff, which is why they asked me to remove the Death Star. This is a parody on the original, so it's ok.

As for your sub, it's unlikely they would accept it, as it is clearly the death star, but I can't say that for sure. You'll just have to submit it and see for yourself. Good luck

Tomorrow???

Night or day version, which do you prefer?



Click through the flash buttons to change preview.

Pink!

pink? O_o

I like both, but black a bit more. Submit both as options. :)



Can you vote and comment on my design?

Drying_Leaf

Well, daylight then=)

Way-cool! Just awesome.



I'm very new here, but if this gets in it might be my first buy :)

I like the day version a little more.



Jibb

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bump

right, asphalt it is! on sale in the next few weeks :D

blacks better

teefury.com prints a ton of star wars shirts .... i bet there's a good chance they'd print this one



:)

bunuel on Apr 18 '10

teefury.com prints a ton of star wars shirts .... i bet there's a good chance they'd print this one



:)



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This is on sale now



here

still on sale ;)