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I love this shirt!! I WILL buy one if its published.
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this should have its own website. the url would be thebomb.com
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Cool. How does the linework look close up?
If you have the time, I'd love some critique on my wes anderson shirt: http://www.threadless.com/critique/63176/Wes_Your_God_Now. |
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SUH-WEET!!!!!
I`m hopefully going to buy one. |
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Max dear...you are just amazing ... I want
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Nice concept! I think it needs a bit of work tho.
Clean it up. Those few black arrows seem out of place, either ditch them or throw in some more. Just some thoughts. Hope you find them useful. Also, use real shirts for the mock up. Here are NiNTHWHEEL's templates. They're sweet, easy to use, and def make the design look better. Keep up the good work! |
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golly....I like it.....I might even buy it.
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And, of course, make the arrow bigger.
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If the lines were a bit bolder and better defined, it would help.
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If the lines were a bit bolder and better defined, it would help.
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dude. sweet. sweet. sweet.
WAH. So good. I love me some arrows! |
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Yeah love the layout, maybe add some smaller arrows as they get to the ends like smaller bracklets. Otherwise it would do we as is I'm sure...
Pls check http://www.threadless.com/critique/63411/Everyone_s_a_Winner |
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Aesthetically this could use some work. Personally im not a fan of anything being well centered. If the tree could start at the bottom left or right and spread, this would be on my must get list. Not to mention this design would work well on any color!
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I really like it, i think it needs a bit more color or shading diversity and then i would like to see it on a real shirt simulation..
Would you look at mine? Ochikubo |
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