very nice work! love it

I'd suggest a shirt color that better accents the idea of being underwater, the gray is nice, sagestone and blue are my obcious first ideas, and I'd put the black seaweed silhouettes in ink on lighter colors as well.

Love it! The sea green is the perfect color to display an under water scenery! It gives it a carribean and exotic touch. I also like the display of dark and light via the silouhette of the seaweed.

Don't understand Papaprime, where is the seaweed not displayed on a light background?

Thanks for the comments. Any other suggesstions much appreciated!

Anymore critiques?

What needs work? It looks complete with a detailed, well drawn design, so what else? I did put this in the right section, right? Critiques please! :)

yvanne66, I was saying if it were put on a lighter shirt, the seaweed wouldn't look proper, not on teh existing shirt templaes.

Oh, okey... got your message papaprime!

Yet, I see artdrops offering this image on dark Tee's only.

Personally I do like light and bright colors on dark backgrounds.

It's like the surfers wear their bright colors on dark or black backgrounds. Yet, I feel that this image would also look great on a white Tee, because of the beautiful turquoise nuances, and the black of the silhoutte would still stand out. Think about it!

i think this is awesome...i love the colors, and think the composition is really interesting.

It is so gorgeous. The design would benefit from one more shade lighter, for accents (but not on the frame/windowsill). This will give it the depth it deserves. Ya know, a few more brighter reflections and details in the water. Also, out of the three top background fish, I don't totally dig the big one, in his place I'd like to see some/one more clown or angelfish like the cute one in the foreground. This will be a great sub.

Thanks, I can definately do a shade lighter as it goes into the open sea.

Do you have a close up view anywhere so we can see the detail? Also, watch out - you can't use gradients. Hard to tell from here if the screws have a gradient in them.

The screws are actually smaller versions of the windowsill so they should be okay.



Gimetzco, I think the fish are fine but I will get rid of the fat one in the back but I must keep the line around the circle or else different color shirts would make it look more awkward.

Made some changes, what do you think?

Anyone?

hey, looks even nicer, now!

I love the cute fishes that are swimming right at you.

I'd say: Submit it!

yes, submit!

it's very beautiful!

I love the sea green!

great design, great work,

love the fishes!

Thanks, I've submitted!

hey, were are the fishes? I am truly looking forward to see your design 'in the race'. Hopefully it wins, because I'd love to buy it!

It is very beautiful.

This is your best design yet. Please please please sub!

great, I just found this design in the 'race' :)

This is a winner!

You just copy/pasted a second fish and made it smaller. It would look better if you made changes to one of them so they don't look identical.

It's an interesting design, good job.



Take a look at my design if you can, I'd really appreciate it.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/40624/Quest_iquest_on