help with a title and design are appreciated.

Great design! The glow works really well. My only change would be see how it looks if you add the grid to ground it...



Have a look at mine

good idea.i like the glow print.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/61614/Umbrella

help with a title and design are appreciated.



added the grid.

my current title idea is, "tron to be wild."

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Cool, can you make the grid a bit more refined. the lines look bit thick in the distance.



here is mine

i like this-good luck!!! submit!

i have one more day please help me out

now check out : http://www.threadless.com/submission/253380/I_m_full_of_sign_s/showmore,designs

and don't forget to comment-thank you so much!

i like the add on



ttp://www.threadless.com/submission/253380/I_m_full_of_sign_s/showmore,designs

Haha, I think this is an awesome idea, but maybe you should make the lines in the first figure more apparent or sculpt it out with shadows.

sorry posted wrong one



http://www.threadless.com/critique/61614/Umbrella

Thanks for the critiques!



Marvin, are you suggesting varying the outline weight to hint at shadows?

grid is a bit messy in the center-left :P



check mine please, i'm looking for suggestions

here

Thanks for the suggestions, I will most definitely give the vanishing point more vanishing :D



Any suggestions on the name?

I'm not all that into tron but nice illo nonetheless!

Thanks. I'm more into the idea of a Tron styled chopper than I am into Tron myself :D

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tron to be wild! that would be a killer name. grid needs little cleaning up, otherwise itīs great! please check out my design too!