I know there have been a ton of quality rainbow shirt submissions lately and I am hoping that when I am done this will be another to add to the pile.



I'm posting this quick sketch cause I love this idea and I wanted to see what people thought.

should the cloud be using thunderbolts instead of fork and spoon?

I like the idea it will be great to see it finished.



If you've got a moment, could you rate my design?

Using lighting bolts is an interesting idea.



I was also thinking an airplane might be interesting, but maybe that doesn't work. I'll have to see what works best, right now I like the fork and spoon

nice idea! I like that a cloud is eating it, maybe have the sun peeking out from another cloud in shock or horror?

Thanks Eric. Nice idea. with the shocked sun When I flesh it out I will see if that fits in. I kinda like the simplicity of the idea as is, but the sun thing may add to it.

Actually if I make the fork and spoon handles the shape of lighting bolts, instead of just plain lighting bolts or plain fork and spoon, that could add a nice touch.

Thanks for the great feedback/suggestions, here is version 2, or at least a much tighter sketch.

New version.

since everything else is scared of the cloud, what if you make the cloud look less cute and more badass?





My 4th Submission: Mechathrash

They are supposed to be scared of or weirded out by what the cloud is doing. I'm not sure how I feel about making him badass, I'll have to think about that.

this is very cool; like the direction it's going in. be good to see it all coloured up. like the lightining bolt knife and fork, and the sun hiding behind the cloud. I agree about making him a bit badass, maybe just change his eyes to be a bit more aggressive.



Now, if you get a moment to pop over here and vote/comment on my latest:

Vote here!

I like this composition a lot, but I think iamzacky is right. It would be a bit better with an evil cloud eating the rainbow and the other ones still innocent.

i realy love this idea-good luck!

i have one more day please help me out

now check out : http://www.threadless.com/submission/253380/I_m_full_of_sign_s/showmore,designs

and don't forget to comment-thank you so much!

New Comp, what do you think?



Also I quickly sketched a version with the rainbow personified as well (holding on to the ground for dear life) does this add or take away from the original?







also checkout and comment about this design on my blog

I think this is a better composition than the original.



check out mine if you have the time



http://www.threadless.com/critique/66262/True_Story

Here's a new version, (trees/fish added)






Click this link to see version with rainbow personified



Click here to comment on the blog for this design

Not quite done yet, but what do you guys think about the addition of the personified rainbow.

lol! Great style and characters. Yes to the rainbow personification! Maybe a bit more yellow mountain texture under the front of him, it seems to cut off a bit too abruptly. You could add some wrinkles under his hands to emphasize his desperate grasp. I'm not sure about this but maybe a more devilish grin, thunder cloud persona for the hungry cloud? Anyway, great idea and illo, cheers =]

Nice fun idea. I second pretty much everything quister just said but then I reckon it'll be ready to sub!



I've a couple of crits on the go if you don't mind taking a look...

http://www.threadless.com/critique/66583/Hurt

http://www.threadless.com/critique/66111/Double_Bass_Guitar

http://www.threadless.com/critique/61134/Dandy_Lion

Thanks! I should have mentioned that this is incomplete especially the rainbow's grip and the foreground where the rainbow is. I will definitely be adding more texture and emphasizing the grip of the rainbow, I want to really get across as you put it the "desperate grasp" I'm thinking two handfuls of grass may do.



As for the cloud I am back and forth with making it cute or devilish. Stay tuned for the next version.

I love this!

lol really cute ! and good execution of your idea !



good job !



Feel free to Comment/vote mine :)

That's hilarious. It even works without knowing what the title is. It looks pretty much ready to me, but it does seem to be a bit empty on the right side.



Could you take a look at mine when you get the chance?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/66324/Kumquat_Squat

ah ah excellent style, excellent idea, excellent everything!



but, everybody seems to agree with quister with the personnification of the rainbow...i am not sure at all. I mean, what you want the viewer to focus on? I mean, first.



The rainbow character distracts from the eater cloud and the rest...too many faces kill the faces in a way lol

or if you want to keep it, you will have to make it perfect, that's not the case right now...



you also tell too much with this face and this hands...in a way, you remove the poetry, you have in it, let our imagination do it.



eheh, that's just my point of view, and i'm french, so sorry for my bad english

Thanks Jebs, I like the rainbow both with and without personification.



I think you make a good point that there might be too much going which distracts from the main idea which was cloud eating the rainbow like pasta. I might have to finish both versions and put it to a vote.

This is actually a really cool design! =D I like the art style! Great Job!



Take a look at mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/64950/Think_Outside_of_the_Box

haha thats funny. i love the suns exspression.



id say no to the personifcation of the rainbow...looks a little like the suns trying to rape it. or not......



but i think it just looks better with out because your in danger of having too many faces/characters, and you could have the base of the rainbow leading up from the bottom of t shirt? so the edge of the rainbow begins a the persons hips if you know what i mean? and so the view leads up into the image.

Ahahaha, thats awesome, i would totaly get one!



Can you real quick look at these:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/66650/Console_tant

http://www.threadless.com/critique/66666/A_Changing_World

This is my favorite that ive looked at tonight. Love the addition of the face on the rainbow. I think as long as you are within the color limits you have a good chance at being a top competitor.



If you wouldnt mind critiquing mine im actually looking to put it in for this months contest. Thanks http://www.threadless.com/critique/66614/God_Wears_Gucci

@ ibyes: with a great pleasure!



i can't wait to see the final versions...but you would sub two versions in the same sub? why not...if you put it on different frames on a Flash template, i'd say go for it!

Hey Jebs, I guess what I meant was that I could sub each version separately. I wouldn't want to have both versions on one sub, it would be too confusing. Thanks

hmmmm, to be honest, your design is very cool, but if you send two versions separately, i am not sure that, with my experience, it would be a nice move...i think that to have the best score, and the possibility to be printed, you should stick with one version.

But the idea to continue in WIP the two alternative semm pretty good to me, so at the end, you see what would be te best option to sub... ;)



in any case, good luck, and that's just a suggestion ;-)



i am about to sub my last WIP, if you want to have a look, that would be a pleasure: http://www.threadless.com/critique/66513/The_Incredible_Be_a_st_Movie_Classification_Title_good_enough

Here is the new version without the personified rainbow. I do like the screaming rainbow but to Jebs point it does take away from the main idea which was cloud eating rainbow like pasta.



I think I will still finish a version of the other one (with personified rainbow) but for now

here is my progress.



I added a rabbit (which needs work) on the right side and I still have to figure out what

to do with the flowers left side. I like how this is progressing, but its not finished yet, I also need to figure out the best way to frame the design as far as the edges. Maybe adding some leaves in the shirt color( blue) to the outside will help frame it.

yeah, beautiful adjustments. I mean, i love the textures you added here and there...(cloud, grass and river for example are gorgious). Of course, the question of personnification is something subjective, but i think you are going in an excellent direction without.



what will be the print process?? 8 colors, simulation proccess?

i think that the textures you added on the cloud could be also added (but softer, not so important in the other cloud under sthe sun...to be coherent, nah? )

i would make slighly motre distressed texture at the border of the circle in the background too...



VERY good work anyway!

Thanks man!



Yeah I am very happy with the progress, I keep on going back and forth with the rainbow. I'll figure it out.



At this point I guess it would have to be sim process. I agree with adding a bit of texture to the background cloud and maybe even the tops of the mountains for consistency.



Check out the blog for new and improved rabbit

yeah, still trying to figure out what to do with that section. Not sure if I am keeping the flowers. but if I do, they will have an expression just like everything else. Thanks

Added new rabbit and small cloud with texture.

loved this!

the rabbit needs more work though, everything here has a grungy feel to it, the rabbit is too clean...



please check out mine:)

Owl Commando

Ha! I dig the disturbed looks the woodland creatures are giving :O)



I think the rabbit face may be a bit hard to discern at this size though.

Yeah, the rabbit DOES seem to stand out a bit from the rest of your design. I think if you fix the rabbit this design'll be ready to go!

Yes agreed I have a small bit of texture in the fish so I will add some to the rabbit/tops of mountians. I'm still not completely sure if i should keep the flowers or add something else, that left side still bothers me a bit.

This is really awesome! I love your execution! I do agree about the rabbit. Great work! I'm excited to see how this does :)



Please let me know what you think of mine:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/66049/Bad_Moon

i lov the sun and cloud the best brilliant idea and great execution, will keep checking

Great idea to start;

I really like the textured look and the way it fades into the shirt around the edges of the design. What are you using to get that effect?



Care to help me out?

Thanks, I am using a combination of textured brushes and masks to fade the edges.

i agree that the new rabbit is not perfectly integrated, in harmony with the rest...the new textured cloud is cool ;-)



i'd say that you could begin to show tee templates to see about the edges, how does it work, right now, it would be speculation eheheh.



anyway, keep up the good work!

Amazing work. I have to say I like the screaming rainbow the best. I think it better shows why the other things have such a look of horror on their faces. But at the same time I like how the rainbow fades into the shirt. It solidifies the design. Maybe you can fuse the two together some how.



Please vote: Love_StinksandPlungedt

Looking Great man! I love the faces! =D



Could you take a look at mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/64950/Think_Outside_of_the_Box

New comp added, This still isn't finished, but I'm really liking the progress I've made. Personified rainbow is here to stay!



Still working on rabbit and the left side (flowers) still doesn't feel finished to me.

Added a bear eating a fish:) (still working on it as far as texture/shadows etc...)

Also are three frames in this template, let me know which rainbow expression you like best.
and if you like the bigger hands for the rainbow (fr1) or the smaller hands (fr 2-3)

Thanks

Added a bear eating a fish:) (still working on it as far as texture/shadows etc...)

Also are three frames in this template, let me know which rainbow expression you like best.
and if you like the bigger hands for the rainbow (fr1) or the smaller hands (fr 2-3)

Thanks

Dunno if it's just my computer, but versions 9 and 10 are not showing up, and I want to see a bear eating a fish. Looking at your other versions though I think this is looking very, very good. I'm not sure that I'm digging the way the reflection of the rainbow looks, though. The other thing that messes with me is the shadow on the last curve of the rainbow, under the mouth, because there's no shading anywhere else on the rainbow. But it does look completely awesome. Can't wait to see how it goes.


a quick critique would be sweet

Yeah I think the site is having trouble with swfs at the moment. The one I uploaded was 180k, I also tried uploading a 131k file and it also didn't work.

check my blog for the most recent versions

yup same goes for me, cant see the image...try again please
Please help me out and rate mine:)
Owl Commando

Added a bear eating a fish:) (still working on it as far as texture/shadows etc...)

Also are three frames in this template, let me know which rainbow expression you like best.
and if you like the bigger hands for the rainbow (fr1) or the smaller hands (fr 2-3)

Thanks

Ok that last swf was 90K, I give for today

I wish I could see the newer ones, but so far, this is amazing.. I would for sure buy this and wear it proudly. Very witty. Good job.

Ok I am giving up on posting a swf for now, but here is the lastest in cutting edge animated GIF format

The only thing different on each is the eyes and hands on the rainbow. in the 2nd and 3rd frames the rainbow has the same hands, the eyes and hands are bigger in the first frame.

Again the bear is a work in progress (do you like it/don't like it?)
Any other comments and crits welcome

THANKS!

I like the big eyes/big hands, but the eyes should definitely be looking straight ahead (at the viewer), not at the rainbow. I mean, he's "running away" so he should be looking ahead of him. The bear is cute. I lovelovelove this design.

I mean at the cloud, woopsies.

i like it.good idea

http://www.threadless.com/critique/66822/need_some_opinions#lastcomment

I like the big eyes/big hands, but the eyes should definitely be looking straight ahead (at the viewer),

I tried this out, I like it and might end up going with it. Thanks.

Very nice I actually like the one looking back as well

please comment one mine
http://www.threadless.com/profile/789649/Holy_Cheese/critiques

this might possibly be one of the funniest shirts i've ever seen. I'll never be able to eat skittles in the same way again haha

SUBMIT!

the eyes looking ahead are better!
i have a BIG doubt about the teeth...dunno, feels too scary with his tooth, did you try to create just a mouth-tongue?

the hands, hmmm, it's detail, perhpas i prefer slightly the tiny ones...

-Added some textures to the rainbows mouth and fixed design of the bear

- Frame 1 rainbow has teeth and frame 2 no teeth, which do you prefer.

Thanks

-Added some textures to the rainbows mouth and fixed design of the bear

- Frame 1 rainbow has teeth and frame 2 no teeth, which do you prefer.

Thanks

PS Anyone else having trouble posting swfs, cause its not working for me.

yeah! definitively better without! (happy you tried my idea)
keep it up

Thanks man, I still think I like the teeth though.

without the teeth he looks more scared so I'd say without the teeth. The teeth look cool too though.

this is awosom! i prefer without the teeth
Please help me out and rate mine:)
Owl Commando

looks good to submit

check out mine

http://www.threadless.com/critique/67012/Follow_the_Music

Close to being done.

-Some fixes here and there (teeth of the rainbow. river ledge added, tongue on fish.)

-Does the bear need to get smaller. does the rabbit?

-Also added - black and white with rainbow in color shirt option.

Thanks

i'd say keep the colors! Evben if the idea of greyscale is kinda cool, it's always kinda too sad to wear (wearability is important ^^ ). Anyway, the bear for me is too important, you even know that i find him not useful here...so... anyway, awesome stuff ;-)

Yeah, the greyscale is just an option, I'm keeping the color for sure.
So maybe make the bear smaller then, ok. Thanks.

yeah smaller ;) And about the edge of the background circle, i think more distressed textures could be a nice touch ;)

Yeah, I am going to distress the border a bit and maybe see what some distressing the image overall looks like.

I'd say it's done. I like it quite a bit! Excellent work!

Please rate and comment mine:
http://www.threadless.com/critique/67589/Lets_play

Excellent! Perhaps this is what happens afterwards:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/64193/Clear_Skies

Hehe, serves him right.

Awesome work dude! Nice style, nice concept, and great execution! I really like the greyscale, it makes sense with the idea you've got.

Also, about the rabbit- the outlines around it's eyes are really thin, so smaller might be kinda difficult. But I think it balances out the image nicely, so you should keep it if you like it!

Best of luck when you finally sub this- let us know in the blog forum so we can vote on it!

Added a distressed sky for the distressed characters. Also a model shot.

submit already it looks awesome

can u critique mine
http://www.threadless.com/critique/67704/Untitled

Its not quite there yet, but thanks.

I think I preferred the other background, this one might be a bit distracting from the artwork. Or perhaps tone down the distressing on this bg a little if you think that would work better :)

I think it looks incredible! I love it!

Yeah, I want to add some distressing, but I agree its not working yet.
I also want to make the expressions on the characters a bit more extreme, I mean that rainbow is being eaten alive, maybe they should be more horrified.

maybe register a little bit more horror for the bear, but I think the rest is dead on!

What do you think of mine?

haha maybe it's just me, but the rainbow actually looks abit happy. like it's playing catch. great job on the use of colors and composition!

please critique mine too - Catch a Falling Star

agree with Wennho.
the rainbow seems kindof happy about gettin eaten.
but other than that amazing design.
and very good transformation from beginning to end.

Critique mine if you have the time
WOULD BE AWESOME

very awesome concept and great design quality.
i like the distressing... keep it.

help me, critique this:
http://www.threadless.com/critique/67851/A_Little_To_The_Right

Ok, feeling like this is it

-I widened the river
-added new rainbow reflection
-added eyes to flowers
- refined the distressed sky.

haha I love it, I think you can submit it!

I would submit this!

Check mine out please.
http://www.threadless.com/critique/68126/The_Game