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v1 Green Leaf, current version








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artdrops
   artdrops on Feb 20 '07
Any suggestions?
artdrops
   artdrops on Feb 20 '07
Please suggest, not jus "Don't Submit". I know this ca be worked, C'mon people!
yvas22
yvas22 on Feb 20 '07
I think it's beautiful!!!
yvanne66
yvanne66 on Feb 20 '07
I love it!! My only suggestion would be to maybe define the leaves a bit more. Nice illustration on the girl, very cute!!
artdrops
   artdrops on Feb 20 '07
Thanks for the suggestions! I can definately work on the detail a bit more! I think the name/ title I chose kinda sucks.... it was late and couldn't think of anythng else at the time.
artdrops
   artdrops on Feb 20 '07
Any other suggestions?
Racoon Dog
Racoon Dog on Feb 20 '07
I really like this. (: It's just, I'm not sure I like how her shirt points at the end. This may just be a personal opinion though.
rtoyota
rtoyota on Feb 20 '07
It seems weird to me that there's outlining used on the artwork of the girl, but no outlining on the leaves. The art on the girl is so well done, but the leaves need more detail and outlining. I also find the swirls in the background distracting.
artdrops
   artdrops on Feb 21 '07
Thanks for the suggestions! I will work on it more.
eille08
eille08 on Feb 21 '07
i agree about the end of the shirt ending in a point.. it interrupts the flow of her body. Maybe make the clothing into a dress that flows in a similar way as the leaves (which need more detail). Did you think of maybe adding some darker greens into the design?
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parisinla
parisinla on Feb 23 '07
based on how its layed out on the test shirt the artwork just seems so overpowering to the rest of the clothing. It reminds me of a big vanity shirt you'd find in EastLA. Now dont get me wrong the image is beautiful. I'd suggest making her smaller and mabey to the side of the shirt or on the back even and then growing the vine pattern out around the rest of the shirt. my $.02
jwalsh
   jwalsh on Feb 23 '07
beautiful! id just say add some details to the leafs
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SF Designs
SF Designs on Feb 08 '11
not sure how this will look on a T. but I do like it
could you please give me feedback on Gaia!!
NDTank
NDTank on Feb 08 '11
I agree with everyone who said the leaves need work. I think the background might overpower things a bit too. It's such a great design though. I'd love to see it reworked.

I'd love feedback on mine...
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