I like the illustration of the lama but I don't understand the concept. I also think that the speech bubble could be rendered the same way as the lama, with same technique and colors so that it would be more balanced.
yes, more detail to the alpaca, or less. it looks a bit blobby at the moment. also make the shadow a bit more accurate (even if it means extending it at the front just a bit).
i'd genuinely buy this one, i find it really funny, but right now it needs a bit of work.
if you have a spare few seconds i'd appreciate a critique too.
I like it! Great texture detail! The shadow is a nice touch, too. I would suggest placing the alpaca somewhere else though, like the bottom left, and maybe trying a comic sans type font.
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