My first design submission,

please rate..

I like the illustration of the lama but I don't understand the concept. I also think that the speech bubble could be rendered the same way as the lama, with same technique and colors so that it would be more balanced.

hahahah, id give more detail to the alpaca..maybe hand drawn..the fur needs to look like fur. weird n amusing..i like it



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Interesting. Nice illustration.



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here too

HAHA.

yes, more detail to the alpaca, or less. it looks a bit blobby at the moment. also make the shadow a bit more accurate (even if it means extending it at the front just a bit).

i'd genuinely buy this one, i find it really funny, but right now it needs a bit of work.



if you have a spare few seconds i'd appreciate a critique too.

Sproutmonster

Very cool, I think the Alpaca could use some more detail.



If you've got a moment, could you rate my design?

i like this!! now check out : http://www.threadless.com/submission/253380/I_m_full_of_sign_s/showmore,designs

and dont forget to comment-thank you so much!

ha ha! Funny. I'd like to see more detail on the figure though. Maybe the same dark lines you see around the speech bubble.



Cheers!

wow thanks for the input guys!

I'll get to work on your suggestions

Wowow! I love it! Maybe add an outer line to the alpaca and some more details? After that, I think you are EXCELLENT!



I wish you the best luck! =)

If you have time, please score / comment my design

what if you create an outlin one the surrounding llamas? so people can see it from afar





My 4th Submission: Mechathrash

Ok, added detail to the alpaca and made some general changes.

Tell me what you think?

I like it! Great texture detail! The shadow is a nice touch, too. I would suggest placing the alpaca somewhere else though, like the bottom left, and maybe trying a comic sans type font.