sky still seems weird, and needs to be cleaned up a bit, thought about overlaying some watercolor work with the sky

Yes, make the sky lines more fluid and moving along with the girl blowing. I'm not sure if this design needs color, but you could try how it looks.



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start of coloration...thoughts on color scheme / darkening effects

I like the style and line work in the background but I'm concerned about how it would look on a shirt. How about showing some placement?



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i like the background

keep going nice idea









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color scheme change

This is an awesome illustration, i'd like to see it placed on the shirt. Will the background pattern fill the front of the tee?



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