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Added a little bit of shadow and got rid of the outline
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i think i'd like it more if his body wasn't standing in 3/4 view, but floating straight forward, like he's looking more like he's dangling in the water. i think the pose you have makes the utters look really strange! i think you could leave them in, but in a different pose. also, i'm not real familiar with cows noses and how to cartoonize them, but something is bothering me (just slightly!) about the round shape. is there a way to keep something similar but make it more curvy, irregular shape, with the nostrils flowing more into it?
if you get a chance, please comment on mine, v4 and v5, thanks! http://www.threadless.com/critique/6020/Bacon_Bombers |
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OK on first glance I didnt get it right away. It would help a lot if you left the shirt blue and added some bubbles, maybe coming out of the snorkle
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Yeah ccarns, I was thinking of adding something like that, but I won't be able to right because I'm leaving today for vacation and I won't be back until August 7th, so keep the critique coming and I'll address them once I return.
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Perhaps add some waves as well? Or fish?
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Like the idea but it definately needs bubbles and maybe some fish or even sea horses
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2 days later
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Yeah I will attend to everyones suggestions once I get back from vacation on the 7th.
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