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Shut down your life.... Or begin a new one! Inspired by MS Windows XP "Shut Down" Dialog.. I removed the "Shut Down Your Life" text and repositioned the mouse downwards... I hope u like it!
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randyotter3000 on Jan 18 '10 I think at the minute it looks kinda boring and like it has taken little effort to create, I dont mean to offend you :( I think a good route to take would be to create a little character or situation under each icon to give it more of an interesting look plus it would mean you could lose the text which most people do not like on design tees. hope you can improve this good luck :)
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Thank u sooo much 4 ur feedback... I'll be working on it very soon...
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lawrence loh on Jan 18 '10 i know an idea need to refine it until you feel wow about it, try focus on the design of the desktop icon instead of putting it into different colour shirt.
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It's nice, but, bro, it's too simple i think. But the idea is cool!
As for me, i like designs with features of culture of the different countries and in which use elements of national creativity. I think, you are well familiar with the culture of your people, be not afraid to add elements from it! Good luck!!))) |
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i like it.though i agree its 2 simple
plz check http://www.threadless.com/critique/59822/just_out_4_sun_cream#lastcomment |
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I agree with the others, it needs more of a hook, a "plot," for lack of a better word. Right now it's just kinda there. I see what you're going for though, and I like the idea! Keep after it.
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