Jeez i'm so new at this. accidentally deleted the first critique submission.

well here it is again... for the love of unicorns

please, more critique!

Updated, made it a little more dynamic

Please critique!!!

AWW man I really like this! I don't know what to say, I wouldn't change anything!



If you please critique mine?



http://www.threadless.com/critique/60182/Blue_Smoke

Its great! A little "metal" for my taste, but can be better if you add some significance to the skulls, or change a little one of them so they dont look flipped :)

I like this- a twist on a retro idea. The spraying looks better than the original. The only thing I would change is that there could be more depth in the crevices of the skulls, as in the eye sockets. Other than that, it's very clean.

nice :)

thanks good suggestion i'll try that roomment

this is awesome! I think you should put glow ink outlining the skulls! kudos

I love the colors in this design, they really look nice together. The only thing that stands out to me would be the horns on their heads, they're kinda big.

Cool..Details on the horns...

Updated Version

Added more detail to the skull



Opinions please

Updated Version

Added more detail to the skull



Opinions please

WOW, in a really really really awesome way. :O

I can't think of any way to improve this.



Bravo.

This is awesome!

but id try a better placement..



i.e cover more shirt

Very awesome!

i tried covering more shirt but someone thinks the skulls in the stomach area looked odd.



thanks people! =) this is close to submitting

also does this have less than 8 colors? im a little confused because the gradients i used altered my chosen colors a bit

i like it, very nice

I like this a lot. My only suggestion is to make the skulls subtly different, so it doesn't have a copy paste feel.



thanks for your critique.

I think the placement is great!

Also, care to critique my altered design?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/60269/Hazmat

o w o I like it

maybe the bottom of the design could go all the way to the bottom of the shirt?

super cool either way :)

I really love the background, triangles, stars, all great stuff! I think I like the skulls but I can't be sure.

This is fantastic! I would love to wear that, I say submit away!

Oh yes I like the glow effect better, this is an awesome design I think you're ready to submit!



If you please:



http://www.threadless.com/critique/60182/Blue_Smoke

awesome

Updated some more

i tried to vary the two skulls this time but without messing with the horizontal flip i liked. i like the way this is coming =)



*can someone please tell me if this is 8 colors or less? because the gradients altered some colors a bit so I don't know how all that works...

also, with or without painted eyes?

Without painted eyes. :)

Updated some more

i tried to vary the two skulls this time but without messing with the horizontal flip i liked. i like the way this is coming =)



*can someone please tell me if this is 8 colors or less? because the gradients altered some colors a bit so I don't know how all that works...

i made the eyes less distracting..

nowww i ask with or without painted eyes :)

maybe the backlighting could be a tiny bit brighter? at least at the bottom left to balance it image a bit more. it feels both futuristic and primitive, which is awesome. i like it.

I think this is my final version

any thoughts before i submit?

crazy good details, but I am not the fan of skulls :)

still there might be some thousands out there, so try ;)

thank you!

thanks for your comment^^

sorry to ask this,does threadless works well in gradient you have here?

By the way,it is a very nice design you have here^^

Thats what i was wondering I have no clue.

I know they do gradients but I just wonder if this is 8 colors or less because some of the colors got altered by the gradients

This is wild. I think you might benefit from experimenting with placement. Try dropping the design down low and off center. I think the colors are working well but this might require a half tone because of the variation.

Any thoughts on my design?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/59216/Zombie_bits

I just took a look at their specialty guide they hopefully, probably can using a gradient or "simulated process"

i gave it a try but personally i like the design placement on the entire shirt

thanks for the critique maestro

yup dont worry about the gradient. looks pretty good, personally i wish there was something more than just skulls, but then again, i dont know how to appreciate this sort of art. u might want to take a look at some of the artwork by xiv. your style kinda reminds me of that.

thanks ill keep that in mind

i really like xiv's work its cool :) thanks for showing me

Hey great artwork, i love skulls and its pretty cool to have some unicorn skulls XD.



I like black tshirts, but i think it look great in other tshirt colors too

Since you're thinking simulated process, what would it look like with a blur applied to the skulls?

here's a simulated process shirt for an example http://www.makdesign.ca/images/fathom%20process%20print.jpg

i think the blur should come out well, hopefully

Great detail on the horns, they look much better. Something about them sticking straight up bothers me though. I don't know how hard it would be to make them a bit more angled forward, but that's about the only thing that really stands out to me. Other than that, it looks awesome! Looove the colors!

thank you to everyone for their help! i think i will be submitting this version now :)

thanks for commenting on mine! i love this design, good luck when you finally submit it. i wish there was something that i could critique, but i can't!

nice work on the skulls good luck with this

I really like this, but think it could be better without the cosmic feel to it, just the skulls and a different background or texture.



Would love some feedback on my design!



http://www.threadless.com/critique/60335/ElectriCity

This design is cool... I like it... Think its time for submission... :)

Looking good. Glad you took my advice.

thanks for the critiques everyone! you guys really me helped out a lot

ive submitted this :)

word...



I'll be eager to give you a 5$



mines up for scoring now...

Can O' Rainbow

I really like the symmetry, good design overall. I am not a big fan of skulls like the commenter above but there are many more who are a fan than those who are not. Keep up the good work.

Thank you :)

i like it...good colours and the imagery is strong. maybe the skulls are too bright tho...



click here to score my t

this is now up for scoring

I'd really appreciate anyone taking time to score it :) thanks guys!

http://www.threadless.com/submission/250665/Believe_in_Unicorns

Good luck to you^^

good but still need more work.i doesnt like background images.try to critique mine at http://www.threadless.com/critique/60753/the_native