Critique this t-shirt design: "How Music Moves Me"

v1 How Music Moves Me, current version

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fatheed
on Jan 14 '10

fatheed on Jan 14 '10

It's all about the UV ink, baby.

Nire Leetsac on Jan 14 '10

cool. I can't think of any changes or suggestions. good job.

I would like to see a shirt with only one of the elements like just the heart or just the muscle man. I think they might be a little less busy by themselves. neat shirt either way.

if you have time to check out mine.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/59850/Hi_I_m_Icarus#v3

EnviousMoon on Jan 14 '10

This is a GREAT concept, and amazing use of the UV ink. The only thing I'd suggest is that the right column seems to be leaning to the left? lol. Like the heart is further to the right than the head, and the dancing man is further to the left than the heart... Totally nit picky, lol. Feel free to ignore it. :)

Otherwise I'd love to see this submitted! I'd buy it for sure!

I would love some constructive crit on mine if you get a chance...

lale123 on Jan 15 '10

i LOVE this!!!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/59832/Neapolitan_Napoleon#v9

elf09 on Jan 15 '10

i like the design in uv

http://www.threadless.com/critique/59989/Every_beast_has_a_playful_side#lastcomment

4 days later

bornd on Jan 20 '10

really like this one!

but there is something with the left blue hand...

great tho!

40 days later

skunkmonks on Mar 02 '10

great concept and illustration.

what if you add more brighter color for the uv ink?

just a simple suggestion

hope you can give critiques on the UV ink as well on this link

http://www.threadless.com/critique/63101/serial_killer

thanks

penneydesign on Mar 02 '10

I love it! I can feel that will be made, but I agree about the left blue hand it loses some of it shape, so maybe fix that and submit.

Can you please look at mine? I trust your opinion! It's music related too - Beetle & Beatles