Lunch break during a hard day at work.

I LOVE this idea. It's going to be wonderful.

This one is just a quick sketch of an idea I had, Ill try and work on a final sketch soon, just want to get feedback on the actual diea etc for now

I like the idea, look forward to seeing the next version.



I've got a video games related crit here that I'm looking for feedback on: http://www.threadless.com/critique/59591/Console_Yourself

This is going to be really cool.



If you have a second please comment on...



http://www.threadless.com/critique/59038/Abe_Tries_on_Hats

Ooops, I meant...



Abe Tries on Hats



Thanks!

IS THAT A BABY KONG

no, it's your momma kong

it hard to tell exactly what it is but i like where ur going



http://www.threadless.com/critique/59989/Every_beast_has_a_playful_side#v6

thank you guys, yeah this is just like a 2 minute sketch, but just to put the idea down, I will post a much better sketch, hopefully by tonight

Have you thought about having mario eating his sarnie on the barrel kinda like those sheep dog and wolf cartoons where they clock on and off together

that would be cool, just drawing mario etc is kinda tricky with copyrights

yeah that's what I thought after I wrote that oh well looks great anyway dude

a more refined sketch.

its a cool concept. can't wait to see where you go with it!



http://www.threadless.com/critique/59832/Neapolitan_Napoleon#v8

this is going to be nice!



Let me know what you think:



http://www.threadless.com/critique/60089/King_of_the_High_Seas



http://www.threadless.com/critique/60111/Trials_and_Tribulations

yup excited to see this!

This is looking awesome, cant wait for v3.



Please score/comment mine if you can.

What if this may resemble another one with a similar concept? Are you allowed to go ahead with it?

I like the idea and you should try to refine the design. add color and details like the thumbnail...im sure it would be awesome!



see mine plse:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/59782/Easter_Egged

hm087ster on Jan 15 '10 What if this may resemble another one with a similar concept? Are you allowed to go ahead with it?



which one does it resemble?

Dellex on Jan 15 '10 I like the idea and you should try to refine the design. add color and details like the thumbnail...im sure it would be awesome!





yeah offcourse, this is just the initial sketch and ntohign close the to the final piece

I made him a lil more mad, since he's a crabby dude always throwing barrels haha

i like where this is going

Coming along nice. I think mad is good., but you might want to try making him look tired. Its got to be rough throwing all of those barrels.



I Would love your opinion on mine



Abe Tries on Hats

which one does it resemble?



An upcoming/ maybe idea by a company called Chunk, printer of Iconic tees, in London, UK. They wanna have Starwars Stormtroopers having lunch on Empire State Building.

ummm I have no idea who they are, sounds like a different idea anyway, so I think Ill keep working on this one

this is looking soooo good, i can't wait to see it finished. and yeah the star wars tee is completely irrelevant



http://www.threadless.com/critique/60089/King_of_the_High_Seas

I had to start with the color earlier then before I finished the linework since it's going to be on a black tshirt to match the actual game. :)

awesomely awesome! can't wait to see the finished design! maybe you could put the Princess bound and gagged or tied to a chair in the background hahaha just an idea. good luck

If ya have time please score mine:

Astro Bubble

I really love how this one's turning out and I just find it funny that people still click on the "needs work" button when it's obviously a WIP from the master himself :)



I'm looking forward to the new version :) Brown is a bit tricky but if the background's light, then it'll balance the design :)

yeah the colors are a bit tricky to work with, Im trying to match the colors of the actual game play, Im thinking Imma add some other color in the background maybe some clouds or something to have the brown stick out more

Thanks for the comment on "Abe" its great seeing this come together. Looking forward to the next post.

It's coming along nicely! The tie looks a little odd though.



If you wouldn't mind checking mine



no more dawn

still got a long way to go, but got a bit more done and started placing the main colors I'll be using

nice!



http://www.threadless.com/critique/60089/King_of_the_High_Seas

very nice.......... go ahead



may you see mine:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/58215/Space_creature

http://www.threadless.com/critique/58496/Wounded_bird

Great! Who doesn't love giant, angry (and hungry) monkey? Keep it coming!

Looking Cool.



I know this isn't a question answer forum, but I have been an admirer of your work and its really cool to see your process.



Do you do an initial sketch and then go digital the rest of the way?

Do you use a tablet? Do you use PS or Painter?



Thanks.

Love it, his expression is great.

Great shirt, I love it. But is the tie really necessary?



My design needs comments, can you provide:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/59982/Ride_It

hey ibyes, Im also writing a stp by step of this one on my website www.oddworx.com I explain how Im going though this one there, let me know if that helps :D

awesome man! sick concept your a great artist! hope you can come check out my critiques please just click on my name and do all my critiques that would rock!!

Im done with the linework, now back to coloring :)

Thats awesome.

got most of the coloring done, Im doing a few more details, but I think its almost ready



6 colors

Looks awesome dude. I don't know how I'll ever be able to get any coloring skills.

cute! how about adding a construction hat on top of the barrel? or a wrench or anything related to construction

ooh great idea! thanx dude

you are amazing, i like this

You've been busy and its paying off, its looking great. Thanks for pointing me to the tutorial on your site.

Sweet! I would wear this. Placement?



Some of the red outlines on the arm and leg are a little harsh. Try breaking them up with some hatching.



Any thoughts on mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/59216/Zombie_bits

I think it looks great, I still think the tie needs some work though. It looks a bit like a balloon animal

Comment and score my design:



What a catch!

ooh I think Ill add a few lines to the tie, so its more noticeable that it's a thin cloth material.



Ill try messing with the lines on him

Wow! Great illustration, love the background too. I would make the barrels color a little darker, since they distract a little from the lunch. Also, already said, the tie needs some work and you could add some construction element to support the idea.



Please check mine out. Thanks!

I started adding a construction hat, but I felt it was too much, I fixed the tie a bit and also the lines, and background. anything else?

No I don't think you need anything, I like this a lot its AWESOME I love donkey kong! use to even watch the t.v. show and everything submit it. I'll be sure to vote



I'd appreciate it if you could critique mine if you don't mind ha ha i kinda rhymed:



http://www.threadless.com/critique/60182/Blue_Smoke

I updated it with the presentation, I'm submitting this in a few minutes, thank you everyone for the help and suggestions

SUBBED! :D

The black and red are looking rad. Reminds of the painting of Mario and DK sitting in the girder drinking beer out of the barrels.

This is rather amazing! Fair play I would buy this if i saw it in a shop! Well done!



Go visit My Critique!!.

Its been fun to watch this come together, looks great!!!

yeah I seen that one as I was searching if someone had the done the idea before, thats an awesome paintitng

it's up for scoring right now

http://www.threadless.com/submission/250535/Lunch_Break

Check out my new design:



Paper clip

funny, great illustration, submit this





My design is up for scoring, please vote!!

it's up for scoring right now

http://www.threadless.com/submission/250535/Lunch_Break

very cool now check out : http://www.threadless.com/submission/253380/I_m_full_of_sign_s/showmore,designs

and dont forget to comment-thank you so much!

simcha! Look at the date on the last comment, this design has already bee subbed and scored. Also, try and give some input instead of "very cool now check out mine". That's all you say on every crit page you go to. Give some thoughts, opinions, suggestions and you'll get some back.

I think he wants the designers on the pages hes going on to score and comment his design.

this is great i love the colour and grain on the barrels

and the progress of the design :)

critique mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/65721/two_faced_backstabbing_lanky_bastard#lastcomment

hey! you should consider to keep one of your designs in plain black and white. I think the beauty of your style relies on the trace, you don't need to say more than that :)
besides, really nice work!

i love your style its so sick.

Help me out and Please Score and Comment: Chalkboard Doodles

I missed the voting on this but it's a wicked design. I hope it prints!

Check it out!

Cool! I thing somethin in hes eyes ... eyes like a neuter. Maybe You should to do sad eyes for hem or sharp look? But this is is insignificant detail, whole picture is very impressive.

Wow look at the angry face...
good job!

How about mine?
Dagger In Heart

great

Ah ah, nice idea!
What do you think of my Gone in the Zomb ?

nice work. good luck with it. i'll vote it when it's up


PS if you have the time, please give me your input on this
http://www.threadless.com/critique/73187/Love_s_like_bondage
Thank you

this is an amazing design!

it looks great, the perspective isnt exactly right like how r all those barrels fitting on that plank? XD but it doesnt really matter. just something i noticed.

if u have time can u help me out? http://www.threadless.com/submission/287853/portrait_of_a_princess

Oh great! You should had some mario clothes in his sammich or lunchbox. Any critique on mine would be super too thanks
http://www.threadless.com/critique/75128/bubble_RAP

You are great designer this is amazing... i like all your shirts! i'll be really happy if you comment my design Punker Card

That is a print for sure. great detail that wonderfully adds to the over all image. Best of luck.

Looking for some comments please.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/75140/Aha_Ha_He

Hey nice monkey. I love looking at the details here. Is this a giraffe

I really like it, nice job, good details!!!!!!
i'm working on color for my t-shirt design but i'm not sure about my job...so can you help me and live comments on my critique link please? i hope for your expert suggestion..:)

There is something about the color combination... but i like the artwork, great concept!

Great illustration!

Lovely! A must have for DK fans ^^

I have also sent in my first design, as a critique, of New York. Check it out if you are interested :D http://www.threadless.com/critique/98217/New_York

this is an awesome design...looks great...if u have time can u score my design?

http://threadless.com/submission/390392/Dead_Tree

man this is so funny!!!!!

I have a shirt up for voting, please check it out! :D
http://www.threadless.com/submission/390879/A_Fair_fight