I didn't get much feedback on the initial post so hopefully this version gets more of a response. I don't think it's ready for submission and I am looking for some ideas.

I didn't get much feedback on the initial post so hopefully this version gets more of a response. I don't think it's ready for submission and I am looking for some ideas.

I like your previous version more but the border you added is cool and the text isn't necessary. Can you show it on a different shirt color maybe - something that would contrast nicely with the green?



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I think it should be in color, can you give me some feedback on my other designs too. Thanks!



http://www.threadless.com/critique/60204/Mysterious_Space#v2

http://www.threadless.com/critique/60217/Filling_or_Emptying

I miss the color from the first one! But I definitely like the linework on this one better. I agree with wave, too, play around with some shirt colors. :) I love this, it's looking good. :)



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this is good. It lacks a little detail though

http://www.threadless.com/critique/60040/By_Demons_Be_Driven

I really love the illustration

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I didn't get much feedback on the initial post so hopefully this version gets more of a response. I don't think it's ready for submission and I am looking for some ideas.

I love it! However i think the demon head should be different color from the tee! Hope it helps :)



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definitely better with the addition of color! and I like the green color for the demon faces.

maybe some shading?

I didn't get much feedback on the initial post so hopefully this version gets more of a response. I don't think it's ready for submission and I am looking for some ideas.