Second version!

Its got a nice atmosphere to it, I would suggest making the balloon ropes a little thicker as they look a little pixelated and unnatural. But otherwise great!

nice design, i think it will be more nice in light blue tee or other light color...

Thanks for the input on my design!

This is pretty cool! if I were to change anything I think I would add some color to the sky and the balloons, to give it depth.



Lookin good!

I agree with Al-Bryan - it would look better in light blue or another light colour. I think the balloons would look cool going further up the tee too.

Thanks for commenting on mine

nice idea. I like the balloons but I think they might look cool if you changed them up a little bit by not having all of them at the same angle.

I also agree that the rope need some smoothing.

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i like the texture in the balloons !!!







check my design please :



http://www.threadless.com/submission/249645/the_first_designer

Cute design, maybe add some more clouds at the top, they look too close to the ground right now.

Third version! Thanks for all the feedback:) I smoothed the lines and added more balloons! I can't decide which colour scheme to go with. Any ideas?

Nice and clean. I like the blue color. You should try it in an actual shirt for better perspective...



check out mine if you have times

http://www.threadless.com/critique/59857/Lyrics_of_death

http://www.threadless.com/critique/59337/High_def

Can you dial back the clouds at all? Dropping the opacity on different ones could create a cool sense of depth.



Check mine out?

this shirt is the shit! light hearted too....lol

Great design! I love the concept. The texture on the ground is throwing me a bit, because everything else in the image is so flat. Might it look more unified if the ground was just flat color?





Woul you send some constructive crit my way?



Thanks!