It was difficult uploading this new version because the website wasnt uploading this right for some reason. Hope you can see this and critique

its looks very nice =] maybe a bit bigger size for the eggs to match the bunny size? also make the eggs outline thicker

While it's a great idea and a nice Illustration my opinion is that it needs a little bit of work in the detail. : )

Yay you added the sidewalk ^^...nice!...agree on the eggs outline...ever thought of bigger eggs? just to put a bit of something something in it. great work!

owwww yeh



I can find the different.... it's very nice



may you see mine:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/58215/Space_creature

http://www.threadless.com/critique/58496/Wounded_bird

Cool idea - How bout chocolate splats? Yeah and bigger eggs!!



Here's mine :)

http://www.threadless.com/critique/59696/MelTED

http://www.threadless.com/critique/59679/Peeking_Duck

Yeah I definately prefer this version. Can't reaaly think of any ways I'd change it.



I’ve updated my design, please tell me what you think

Looks good. But you're a bit early to release this now.



Please comment on my design: "Cubist Zebra" too.

thank you guys! ill fix the eggs!

hope the eggs are big enuff!

GREAT illustration! and great idea. I like it on the sand coloured tee. Could you add a twist like a reason for actually egging the door or splats that aren't egg yolks (for easter eggs) although I don't know what that would be.



TBH I like it as it is!



Please score/comment on my design here.

Yeah now it is better!

thanks guys. oh and please place a check for either "submit this" or "needs work"

i like this, but the design could be a bit less simple.



could you please check out my design?

Orangatastic!

haha, perfect with easter round the corner!

I like it on the beige best; the blue egg in the basket looks great on that colour.

Nice idea! :)

thanks guys!

thanks guys!

Nice! I do like it better on the beige shirt too!...Have you tried to make the rabbit looks furry/fuzzy, add some texture to him. May make the design look better, more detail?

Good job!

I would agree with the comments on the detail. I'd personally like to see more work in it. The cartoon look is working, but there just needs to be a little bit more going on.



Check out my weird: We All Scream for Ice Cream

Hahaha love it, its a great idea. I think with a bit more tuning up in places this could be ready for submission.



Zombies

reaally? furryer rabbit? but then it wont be as cartoony. i could add some lines somewhere to indicate furr but ive seen some cartoony rabbits and there isnt a lot of furr to indicate "rabbit". What if I do something with the ears?

reaally? furryer rabbit? but then it wont be as cartoony. i could add some lines somewhere to indicate furr but ive seen some cartoony rabbits and there isnt a lot of furr to indicate "rabbit". What if I do something with the ears?

Nice idea





please critique my tee

thanks

thanks

I like this pic but i think it needs an eyecatcher. On your pic the splattered eggs are the catchers, but they donīt seem to be perfectly placed!



Anyway cool idea!

This is clever! Something about the door is distracting to me though, or it might be the bricks.



Any thoughts on mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/59216/Zombie_bits

Nice clean design.... trying to think of something to maybe spice it up a bit more.... but nothing is coming to mind.



It works on both shirt colors.



I think you could change the 2 black rectangles on each side of the door to outlines.... they seem a might bold compared to the rest of the background.



Good luck and thanks for the crit!

made a few changes especially to the door.

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pleeeaase i need more input. i made some tweeks

plz check

http://www.threadless.com/critique/59822/just_out_4_sun_cream

NOT MUCH OF A FEEDBACK THERE!

good idea



improve the illustrations

much free space. Maybe you should put something there.



Maybe you have time to check my design: Welcome to the jungle

Sorry part of my message was deleted. I wanted to tell you that I think that in front of the door is much free space!

Looks good, but how about a window and some more broken eggs on the wall???



Check my design here

mmk. guess it looks too simple. thanks anywayz.

I think the egg splatters should be colorful. ...or chocolate. ..but then I guess that starts to look like something else, huh?



Check mine out?

the eggs could have more color. is there anyway you could add even more easter-y symbols... like fake grass or something..



good luck!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/59832/Neapolitan_Napoleon#v4

remember the idea is the easter bunny egging peoples houses. he normally carries eggs and my idea is like a "what if" joke. What if he went around egging people's houses?



I can try making the egg yolk chocolate and see how that looks.

remember the idea is the easter bunny egging peoples houses. he normally carries eggs and my idea is like a "what if" joke. What if he went around egging people's houses?



I can try making the egg yolk chocolate and see how that looks.

actually i just got it. I prefer to make the yolk colorful cuz makin it chocolate would make it look like poo or something. I can use the pink and blue for that and some other color. let me know what you think

actually i just got it. I prefer to make the yolk colorful cuz makin it chocolate would make it look like poo or something. I can use the pink and blue for that and some other color. let me know what you think

u need to add a little more to the house



http://www.threadless.com/critique/59989/Every_beast_has_a_playful_side#v6

mmmmkay!

I will work on the vague house

hm..why have you made her boobs bigger? Does that come with the T-shirt??? Anyhow...funny tee

huh? i didnt make her boobs bigger. i guess they got big when I was changing her shirt's color and erasing the background. heheheh. and only you seemed to be looking at her.



anywho...more crit please!

haha, it's so great and fun i love it!!!!



could you please??


http://www.threadless.com/critique/60171/A_Bird_That_Wants_to_Fly

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This is hilarious I would say ready to submit!



check mine out if you can!



http://www.threadless.com/critique/60186/Pants_on_the_Ground

thanks guys

This is very cute and funy!



Check mine out?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/60205/Computer_Virus

Your concept is brilliant, but the illustration needs something. Possibly make him egging a car. Just a thought.



Please take a look at mine and leave feedback:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/60146/Spy_roll

a car might work. ill make more changes to it. thanks for the inputs

very cool-i like this!! now check out : http://www.threadless.com/submission/253380/I_m_full_of_sign_s/showmore,designs

and dont forget to comment-thank you so much! and good luck!

havent been here in a huuyle! supp

wow 180 days later xD that incredible

well bunny looks fine, and the idea is clever and funny, try to meake the eggs of chocolates, best of luck, hope that you dont take 180 days more on this xD

can you RATE bananas please?

yes chocolate eggs instead of the normal ones

Holy... freakin' crap. Soooo many comments, haha. Also, yeah, pretty funny.

Couch Surfer: I believe this is it... (V.10)

Cup of Rocket: Unleash the fury!

ok guys keep in mind that making them chocolate will make it look like hes throwin poo. soooo...think about that for a moment!

ok guys keep in mind that making them chocolate will make it look like hes throwin poo. soooo...think about that for a moment!

This is best as it is, just submit this already. But if you somehow feel want to add something more, make something drastic, Put it all in colour, the door, the wall and the roads. Bt thats just my opinion :)

Would you rate mine? No One Should Be Alone

A hilarious idea. I think the right hand should be redesigned, is not very natural.

I like it, its cute. Maybe make him under a streetlight?


If you have time I would appreciate it if you could score my Mario design. Thanks!

http://www.threadless.com/submission/290356/An_Unfortunate_Accident

did some tweaking. hope you all like!

yea, look better with the color eggs and yes you are right chocolate look like poo xD

thanks guys! please check whether i should submit or not.

man, i like this ideia!
you should work on that art!

Agora sim, a mão direita está muito melhor.
Tem um tempo?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/74121/Serious_Gentleman

ummm....Winck could ya say that in english? could anyone translate that? ^^

This is a great Easter shirt! Though, I'd love to know whose house he is egging.... maybe Santa? jesus? haha someone?


And if you have a moment please crit my design. Thank you!

i liked this funny and i like the blue should put it on a shirt.

critique me please.
Reality.

Nice idea. I feel like it could be cleaned up a bit - the way the bunny's ears flop over, for instance.


I'd really appreciate some feedback on the latest version of my design.
Matador

Thanks!

I think it's a fun idea, just needs some fine tuning on the art. The thick line across is neck probably doesn't all have to be there. Keep it going!
Please vote for "Origin of Sasquatch"!! Time is running out! Thanks :)

thanks guys

thanks

a lil tweaking

some forgotten tweeking. but heres wat i got so far. hope its acceptable

I like the design, and it's a great idea.
well executed too.
Maybe work around with the background/shirt colours to see if anything works better. I like the blue better than the beige.

if you want to help me with mine:
http://www.threadless.com/critique/89724/Ducky_Dive

I think that the rabbit's shadow is too dark for the rest of the design...try to change its opacity or make it in a dark grey! The design is really good!


please check my work here!

Guston wants know if that is a Guston?



Guston; he's a Guston

thanx

I don't think is a good idea to have different colors on the egg yolk, they look like rotten.

Comment on mine please :)

hahahahah so funny! I think you should submit it :)

Please feel free to criticize my work :) thanks...

gracias! =)

The only thing I would add is a house number.... But it's not necessary great design

great idea! :)

My only suggestion would be to make the black lines on the door frame / bricks thinner so that eye is more focused on seeing the bunny first and then his target second.

I agree with sirdiddymus, how about making them dark blue?

please have a word on mine if you get the chance:
Treasure Hound

thanks for the tips, ill get to work on it more. please be sure to check whether i should submit or work on it.

changes done! and please also check on either 'submit this' or the others. comments also accepted

this is actually pretty good :)
Ok so how about outlines around the eggs? cause on that cream tee i can't really see them, btw that's the best option imo.
I'd make shadows less dark, use maybe brown, maybe you could use brown as a outline color of whole design, it's not a big deal to try it :P
Have you considered to draw doors by yourself? you know, with hand. make them unperfect and you wouldn't then need to make them interesting somehow, if you know what i mean. It's doing a lot to draw them by hand.
Good luck mate ;)


Oi! mate, what happened to my ship?!

thank you ^up^

another version with changes.

Freaking hilarious!

great concept, and i like the simplicity

Critique Me!

thanks guys. anything else?

I think the design itself is fine, but i find for easter eggs they are not all that colourful, 2 out of the 4 in the basket are shades of brown so they look like normal eggs, so maybe brighten them up? maybe even add some designs like they have been painted its looking good tho =)

You should also add the egg shells in front of the door :)

aaand another

I think i would drop the black color in this design...
replace it with dark blue, as you did with that shadow under the bunny. I'm also not sure about those broken eggs, try to use blue as a shading there and you'll see...but now the shading is really disturbing (maybe cause it's black).
Good luck :)

Oi! and my newest design is up for scoring mate, so support me by scoring and commenting on it! thanks ;)

yeah dark blue would look nice... this is funny :)

soooo instead of black lines, i use blue lines??

wat else?

i love this..jus last week i was thinking of a design that meant 'easter egg' by pictures...but i must say i find this one awesome piece of work... n y does this say wip 502 days ago? u should submit it right away...jus a bit of final touch up...good luck

Submit it!

Please check my design and leave some comment http://www.threadless.com/critique/90049/Thepokerplayer

I agree with the blue lines. The black looks very out of place. Also, perhaps either fewer eggshells at the doorstep, or no egg shells at all. Other than that it's good to go! :)

My design is up for scoring! Please support me by voting and commenting! Thank you. :)

looks good please check this then check that if you have time

persian, i would have subbed this but i wanted to make sure it was ready to be entered. i didnt wanna enter it only to find out that it needs work. then of course i took a hiatus on it and came back to it recently. and apparently it still needs work. i wanna make sure its perfect to where it will get a good enuff score to be printed.

sooo yea ill go and make tweeks on it once more. thanks guys

Make the egg shells on the door a bit round like egg, so that it is clear with the blink of an eye that its the egg shells... othan that that.. the design is awesome and good to submit!

What do you suggest here?

thanks again

I agree on the black colors. Maybe lighten the shade, it seems a little out of place. For the most part, this is a great idea, and its funny. Looks like you've been working on it a long time, haha. Great job.

Wanna check out my critique? Some advice would be much appreciated.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/90074/Thank_You

wow. You've been working hard on this. Maybe make the egg spats a little bigger, but all in all, I like it as it is.

Critique mine please?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/90106/Short_Day_at_the_Beach

i chose to make the lines black again since the problem was the balance of color and attention. also messed with the lines a bit so it looks like it has some sort of texture. and more attention is drawn to the bunny.

and yes i have been workin on this a lot cuz i also wanna see if i can make a print-worthy shirt. another idea comin soon

and yes i have been workin on this a lot cuz i also wanna see if i can make a print-worthy shirt. another idea comin soon

Hey this looks great man! I love the texture on the lines and I totaly think this is a print worthy shirt. Go ahead and submit it your ten different versions were worth it dude :D


If you get a chance please help me out with my design

thanks. ill wait for some more input before subbin

up ^^

really want some more input, for sure from those who havent seen it yet.

Hmm. Maybe some light shadowing on the door and wall? Might make it pop out more.

Please crit if you have a moment?

well i minimised the details on the door to give more focus on the bunny. see previous designs

Cute! I like the design and I agree with the changes you made, I like the perspective and the simple lines for the door. I'd submit.

Please check out mine when you get a chance:
http://www.threadless.com/critique/89204/treecycle

i subbed it. check it:

http://www.threadless.com/submission/345983/Easter_Egged

and vote