I'm not sure about the colors either. Something could be modified, but not sure what. I'd mess with different color options some more to find the right fit. Otherwise, I think you've got a winner!
The colours look a bit strange. I don't think purple and yellow go well, the yellow on the other is a little too bright on the black and murkey on the white one also.
I would go with maybe purple glitter on black.
Name wise what are you going for with the image itself is it the people or the fashion style, or the way there standing? use that for the basis of your idea the concept usually gives you its title.
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Let me start off by saying I love the lineart! It's funky, it's cleanly done, and it's interesting. That being said, the yellow lines on white or black literally hurts to stare at. I really think your best bet is purple on white. Keep up the great work!
I think a little bit of color would look really great, however I wouldn't want it to lose your awesome sketchy style! My favorite is the light blue tee.
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thrift is a gift. really sweet. and i really like the colors added. have u ever thought about drawing comics? cuz ive been looking for some people to draw mine...
I need a name. Any ideas?