This is my first design for Threadless and I wanted to design something simple, funny and zombie related. Sorry about the pun in the title though :P



Any feedback given would be brilliant more so constructive criticism.

nice :) love the colors ;)

anyway, maybe you can add a low opacity black that will serve as a shadow to make it look more solid. Otherwise, this is ready for a sub :))

Cool idea, I would try to add some wrinkles in the hands to make them look more Zombie like! Maybe some hair too! If you have time check out my design.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/58709/Giraffe_McGaffe

- Thanks Maxx

I think the pinky needs more curve, it looks flatter than the others.

Hey guys thanks for the feedback. I'll start working up a version 2 with the suggested changes. :)

I agree with Colourcraze, the pinky is slightly off. Maybe put in some lines to signify the knuckle before the nail. Apart from that I'd say it's ready.

Simple and good. But could maybe add something more...



Would love to hear some thoughts and suggestions on my design!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/59315/Death_From_Above#v9

I like the idea. The only thing I would change is to either add or take away detail. the hand is very cartoony whereas the blood is a bit out of place. also, Thought the color palette is nice with the green and red, but it doesn't scream zombie to me. It kind of makes me think of shrek :P maybe a different skin color?

just somethings to try.

i agree the colour almost makes it shred like

but also the finger next to the middle finger the one thats bent looks a little weird too almost a little to high. if you do that with your hand it doesnt look like that



what u think of mine

http://www.threadless.com/critique/59610/jack_rabbit

Awesome concept. But I think the design would work better if it were more realistic rather than cartoony.



Comments or feedback on my design:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/59506/Nighty_Knight#v3

I think some little crumbles or broken pieces of bone and finger might help deliver your point a little better. Clever concept, lets see V2!

I would say play with the two folded knuckles, they need to be moved slightly to be anatomically correct.

Also make the main outline dark green, doing those to two things should set it off!



Thanks for the comment on my work, it's actually been in for submission for almost a week though.



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cool ;D