I wanted to try a different style to my first design. This is Heading South, where the bad people go.

The red totally pops off the olive color. I really love the color scheme to this! There's not a whole lot I can contribute here! Looks great!





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how about adding a road to it and perhaps a bit of perspective? and thanks for the comment

nice work, it looks great

very cool! but yea i agree on adding more perspective and a road.

I really like the idea. Maybe a little smaller with some hint of a background. Also some blood smears on him. Cool!

I would make the hand print a bit more faded. That's the only change i see that should be done.



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haha i like maybe a faded print would look cool

i like the simplicity of the design, but adding a road could possibly work. i do agree about maybe fading the handprint a bit. maybe it's not even necessary. love the illo style. is the image from a movie reference? it looks like it could be.

Awesome color scheme, keep it definitely. I agree with Ian-S about adding a little more to the background, it could give the illustration more depth.



Take a look at mine design, I could use the opinions:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/59506/Nighty_Knight

Thanks for the comment!

This is funny!! I think the only things left to really experiment with are color options and placement :) niiiice job :D



And if you're not too busy, I would sure appreciate if you voted and commented on my design! It's the subbed version of my critique you commented on :)

Mohawks of the Wild Kingdom

I think the guy is really cool.

The only thing I think might be changed it is placement of the briefcase. It takes to much space now.



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haha thats funny... in a morbid way.



maybe add one more color? or an outline. but its great!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/59562/Whats_behind_door_number_3

Thank's for all your comments I will take them under advisment and work on a newer version today. Oh and no it isn't a film reference it's just my warped imagination.

I really like this, but think a different color scheme might be better.



If you have a second, please leave some thoughts on mine!



http://www.threadless.com/critique/59315/Death_From_Above

nice concept.nice sketching.

-BG need to be added

-handprint blood strains can be at two places were he holds the card



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A Time travel thro the Myth

Right this is version two. I have given him something more solid to sit on and with the rock texture I feel it gives it a bit of perspective. I have also as suggested, faded the hand print which I think works better, though I haven’t put blood splats on him as I thought it would be over doing the red a bit. I tried a lot of combinations of backgrounds. Such as cityscapes, desert and mountain but because of the colour scheme they all seemed to detract from the main image. It was the same with the road It either looked like to much or too messy. Anyway this is the modified version I ended up with tell me what you think.

Nice drawing, although I don't really understand the bleeding suitcase. It has some kind of mystery though.



Perhaps you could draw a huge pale moon in the background, to add to the creepy effect. Use a faded version of the yellow colour for it.



Please comment on my design: "Cubist Zebra" too.

I'll give it a go.

I actually really like this, but do think it missing something - that final spark that will set the design to life. Very nice so far though.



Not sure what colour the glow in the dark inks come in but maybe have the blood and as suggested above, a moon - appear in glow in the dark ink?



Would hate for this design to be come too complex as its shaping up to be a winner, but it is definitely missing something.



If you get a moment could you give me some feedback on my design? Zombies

Yup, this is definitely better than v1. However, Flick-n-Swish is right in sayingI actually really like this, but do think it missing something - that final spark that will set the design to life. I just can't seem to pin down what the element is.

I added a moon. Wacha think?

i think this is awesome. I am not crazy about the color scheme though. Maybe just a different shade of yellow? The idead and skills are great

i actually like the rocks. great! hmmm...how bout something with the moon? i think it needs a bit of work.

cool but why is there a bloody hand on the text and blood coming from the suitcase?

interesting....

what u think of mine

http://www.threadless.com/critique/59610/jack_rabbit

Hi megless, first of all, let me say that you really(!) improved your design from stage one to stage two. Stage three, however, hardly changes the visual impact of your design at all. For me, the moon tilts the image slightly towards to left and to be honest I think your design worked better in stage two than in stage three. Also, your scene looks much more sunlit than moonlit, though I can't explain why.



Also, as the poster above me touches upon, why the blood? Did you have some specific scenario in mind? Your drawing of the guy is great (and the rocks look so good!), but he does look more teacher-y than serialkiller-y. Is the suitcase filled with blood money, perhaps? With a specific drawing such as this, you gotta keep in mind that people will read a narrative into your image. Maybe you could help that narrative along?



Anyway, I recommend either changing the moon or deleting it all together and I recommend that you rethink the purpose of the blood. Overall I'd say this design has a lot of potential and I really like it, but for the 'cartoony' feel really to take off it needs just a little more. Good show, I'll be back for more!

I like it, the colour work for me. The only think I would change is the moon to be the same colour as the rest of the yellow

I love this one, the only thing i would change is maybe the color of the shirt to a black maybe? it's great!

I really like the concept. His facial expression is great.

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http://threadless.com/submission/249181/Jellybolts

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http://www.threadless.com/critique/59712/just_out_4_sun_cream#v2

this is nice-good work :)

pretty awesome! love the style. great job.

Cool illustration...

I don't see why you need 3 shades of red (I cant see the difference)? More colors make the printing process more expensive and printing the shirt less profitable. So if there is no real need for another shade of the same color I would suggest not using it. Keep it up!

Thank's for everyones advice. I think I'm pretty well ready to submit this.

Think this one's ready, just need to play with silhouette and shirt colours for experimentation.. think it'd make all the difference!



Thanks for the feedback on mine =]



Hoping it will print, I've merged all the layers in a way that'll make it nice and easy for them. Just looks complicated put together.

Not sure what limits they have with gradient colour, seen alot on here that have used the same print method as mine so it should be cool.



Good luck =]

I love this style it's very awesome! I think the moon was a good addition! I say submit! good luck!

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Astro Bubble

Awesome.

I actually really like the colour scheme. I think the moon is a nice touch, otherwise it looks too symetrical.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/59783/truck_stop

http://www.threadless.com/critique/59541/Ride_On

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Awesome. I'd experiment with a few new t shirt colors. Also, maybe give us a second tone of yellow to give the image a little dimension.



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I like the moon. I think you should keep it in!

I like version 2, the moon looks too separated from the rest of the design... but if it gets printed like in version 3 I wouldn't mind, great job gal!

keep it up.
feel free to check mine
http://www.threadless.com/critique/101411/Burning_Night
thanks

I don't understand why there is blood but I really like the color choice and combination. Great work


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