Just a design i came up with a rainy day, dont know if it's any good but wanted to give it a shot :)

check it out :d

that's a really cute bird on the right :P

its nice but looks like it could be made a bit more eye catching/interesting? keep up the good work!

thanks :)

Going along with sarah, i think it'd be cool to see it on some other colored shirts. Or maybe on a model or something.

diffrent colour on the shirt ? or maybe u want some other colours on the design itself?

Second verision, added a sunset kinda of feeling and changed the colour of the clouds :)

the colors are beautiful! i love it. the only thing i would change is the white tee shirt color. i would use cream. but that's just me :D great job!

For a title - how about:

Hum with me

thanks :) ya well People if you want other colours on the tee just say so and ill change it its easy :P

Oh :O Nice Diejest :) i like it , i like it alot :D

This is cool! The only problem is.. yeah the shirt looks cool from the front.. but what about the back? Will the design wrap around? It would be pretty awkward if the design just stopped at the edges.. I think if you make it wrap around, even just a little, then this would be perfect!

And if you're not too busy! I would sure appreciate if you commented and voted on my design!

Mohawks of the Wild Kingdom

this feel like it's in the evening, may be change the white tee to be cream as Mel2DaIssa suggested should work. And may be make another version in mid day (in blue tone) on white tee.



it's gorgeous by the way



If you have a time, here's my design

Thank you :)

Gradients and half transparent birds will be difficult to print I assume, so maybe instead of a background using the colour of the t-shirt itself? Try the cream one as it was already mentioned twice.



take a look at mine, please

http://www.threadless.com/critique/59401/Guitar_Your_Heart_Out

http://www.threadless.com/critique/59328/Colour_Test

Just a design i came up with a rainy day, dont know if it's any good but wanted to give it a shot :)

Cream colored Tee :)

i don't know the other will like it or not, but i LOVEEEEEE it ^ ^

Thank yoouu :)

nice!!!!

Anything you would like to change ? :)

leave commenst people

I'd like to see more grass stuff in the middle, It kinda looks like someone mowed the grass right there then stopped. The humming birds seem out of place to me maybe if they were silhouetted like the grass that might look better, they are just too photo realistic for me at the moment.

put more grass in the middle and make the grass on the sides taller. also put the hummingbirds closer together, and get rid of the cloud behind the bird on the right. its starting to look a little cluttered! There's also a horizontal line in the middle of the shirt.



The colors are really nice though. :]





critique mine please?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/59485/Its_Goin_Down

hey thats nice! just fix the sky gradient: the orange part in the middle. overall nice!

this is realy cool :)

Very nice illustration. Be careful around the sleeves. I think the value of the grass could go darker but don't kill that cyan all together, it works well with the orange. I would like to see the same cyan in the birds, the gray is a little alarming.

Sky gradient in the middle needs a quick fix, but the idea and concept are great! I like the 1st version a lot, but don't necessarily mind the color either. Keep plugging away!



If you have some time, I'd love to hear some ideas on my design!



http://www.threadless.com/critique/59315/Death_From_Above#v4

really cool design! i think the shirt should be a different color? maaybe brighter? but cool!

Tried to fix the flaws you saw tell me what you think :)

if you think it needs work come on cant you tell me what you think ? :P

Name this 'wings of dawn' and I think it is perfect...submit

Or 'wings of sunset' lol

haha thanks :) y im thinking of titles thanks for all sugestions :)

darker birds made this look better ^ ^

Please don't spam submissions with a link to your own work. People work hard on their submissions and it is their little walk of fame and not yours. When voters score a design they get directed to the next design. By putting your link on someones design you're getting the people to vote on your work instead.

Interesting composition.

I think this is a dope design and will make a sick shirt!!!

Nice fixes!!! I don't think you need the cloud on the left to go across to the sleeve though. Maybe try to fade it out before it get's there. I like all the changes you've made so far!!! Keep it up!!!



I have a new version of myPeanut Club critique, if you have any suggestions!

Ah, yes, looks much better in this version!

really nice! im not sure that you need the clouds above the humming birds. maybe try without the clouds?



suggestions for me?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/59552/Chillin



thx

The title will be either "Wings of the dawn" or "Hum with me" you can vote about it :)



Also about the edit, I faded out the cloud on the sleave and moved it abit tell me what you think and thanks for all the other comments :)

I just sent it in for submission but i still got it out for critics here it is if you want to score on it :)

plz check

http://www.threadless.com/critique/59712/just_out_4_sun_cream

Check to see if too many colors, otherwise this is just too breathtaking for words.



See mine here Please.

very nice design



may you see mine:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/58496/Wounded_bird

http://www.threadless.com/critique/58215/Space_creature

Very cool! I like "Hum With Me." :)



Check?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/59760/The_Greater_Good#v3

Beautiful! Good luck with the submission voting!!



Woul you send some constructive crit my way?



Thanks!

I got your answer. I asked Thread Support and they sent me these two links though I have to review them.

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Changed mine up a little.

Help about the number of colors.

verygood work! now check out : http://www.threadless.com/submission/253380/I_m_full_of_sign_s/showmore,designs

and dont forget to comment-thank you so much!

Wow, this is beautiful! I don't think the title is all that important for a shirt unless it's a pun, or something. Just name it something simple like "Humming Birds", and submit it for sure!

I like it quite a bit!