So this is a work in progress. I wanted to post it to see what people thought. I might be dating myself, but I think this is a basic truth

that all men have or will face in a store like (ikea/crate and barrel etc...)



I will be fleshing out the background a bit more. But I want to keep the overall drawing in that simple airline safety/ ikea technical drawing style. I will also be exploring color although it could be cool

with not too much color.



Let me know what you think.



Thanks-ibye

I want to see it placed on a tee before i help you. I think the idea is not bad, but probably with a bit of colour it will be better.

Help me with this, please

I like the illustration. I think the drawing works as is but color would be an option but like you said not too much color just accents.

Thanks. I am working on it, is the concept not clear to anyone?

bump

I thought it was pretty funny but my wife didnt get it until she read the comment. (ha ha) I know that feeling...

I'm not sure about color I love B&W.

Check mine out if you have time!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/59183/The_Greenman#v3

I like the concept of this one, and the bold, simple line drawings. Might want to adjust the angle of the "sale" sign-- it seemed a bit off-kilter to me. Otherwise, nice work! Cheers!


Ps, please vote on mine-- only a couple more days left!

http://www.threadless.com/submission/381710/Craneiac

Maybe fix the lines of the wall around the mans and womens legs. The empty space around the figures throws me off a bit

Could you give me some feedback? Thanks!
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