how about this one?

how about this one?

comment on this one please.

tell me what should i do or not to do in order to improve this design

I think people are hitting " Don't submit" because the Thai buddha symbol has been done , you will find this image on canvases and tiles in any homewares shop or in target .

Your version of it isn't particularly original or clever, if you are going to use a symbol like this I think you need to make it different and unique, or at the very least hand drawn.

I don't really know what I can tell you to help you make this design better, and I feel like a real bitch being so brutally honest... but you did ask.

ah ok, thank you very much silly.