how about this one?

how about this one?

no text and add color, then win.

tnx again sourbitch! ;p

how about this one?

maybe a deep red tone, something more... intimidating. Like, deadly/poisonous animals in the wild with bright colors.

how about this one?

V2 better, but i think something missing, add little fishes or something

V3 much better

v.3

hmm... it's a seacreature, right? is it swimming in blood (red background) or blue/black for the depths of the ocean?

what kind of fish is it... I think I know what it's meant to be but it's not exactly an obvious design that clicks... I think if i wore it, i would have a lot of people asking me about what it is.

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its a fugu fish

its very popular in japan

when prepared poorly, it can kill those who will eat it

anyways, i've tried it differen colors of shirts and it works.

tnx for all the comments, really appreciated it

but before i submit these one, any final suggestions?

tnx

version three is great. do you want to make the fish a bit more menacing? i mean i like him kind of innocent too, just wondering

The fish in v.3 but put it on a different color shirt. Black or forrest green.

Fish in v3 is working the best, and this colour combo would work well on a tee.

how about this one?

im back, been busy lately

pls help me with this revision

resubmit?

maybe give some environment for the feesh

I agree with SourBitch and also, how about different tee colours?

Perhaps you could add some sort of red emphasis in the background, like a sort of angular electric glow?

how about this one?!

denied twice already

huhuhu.....

Seems a little dark - the fish doesn't really pop out. I love the skulls hidden in the scales, though.

haha...i laughed. I'm not sure what's wrong with it.

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i like it on this color better, but the eye looks a bit funny to me

yeah the eye looks off i would fix that and fix some of the rough spots

I would probably move on at this point. Come up with something even better and sub that.