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bornd on Dec 28 '09
really like the idea...
maybe add some shades... |
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bt_cruiser02 on Dec 28 '09 haha! funny concept. I think I'd lose the word bubble though. I think the illustration gets the Idea across without it. Could you take a look at my design and let me know what you think.
http://www.threadless.com/critique/58969/Neverending_Flight |
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simcha123456 on Dec 28 '09
nice :0
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kedge on Jan 05 '10
just an idea when i saw Newton's cradle.
hope u would like it & give me some advises. I make some changes... |
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Pyros82 on Jan 05 '10
Lots of colors on this, although you could do with flatter shades which would still work well. I'd also lose the text. Try making the first-to-be-hit ball look a little more miserable and you're fixed without the text.
Check mine out please? Cat's Nightmare Thanks! |
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nathanparks on Jan 05 '10
I agree, great concept! I'd try and make the subjects more illustrative and a little less like they were put together with basic shapes and basic gradients.
Also what about making the other end ball an evil one as well? I'd work on the text as well. Look forward to seeing this design progress. Check mine if you get a chance - Do we call the Pope or Graceland? |
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kedge on Feb 24 '10
just an idea when i saw Newton's cradle.
hope u would like it & give me some advises. |
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fightingforhope on Feb 24 '10
this great, would work on the graphics some.
please score mine? http://www.threadless.com/submission/256647/Cat_got_your_heart/showmore,designs |
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WorldOfTwo on Feb 24 '10
Try to delete the trace (on the balls and bars) I think it will improve the design! :D
Please, critique mine. http://www.threadless.com/critique/62699/Pop_Diva |
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kedge on Mar 25 '10
just an idea when i saw Newton's cradle.
hope u would like it & give me some advises. |
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jgoodrum89 on Mar 25 '10
Creative, i like it! Can you print this many colors, though?
Check out my first shirt when you get a chance! |
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dashalu on Mar 25 '10
I really like this idea. Try cutting down on the colors and maybe make the corners of the base rounded instead of pointy (you don't have any sharp edges anywhere else so it's a bit distracting). It might also help to increase the size of the balls. Good work so far!
Please let me know what you think of mine: http://www.threadless.com/critique/64752/The_Hitchhikers |
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kedge on Apr 07 '10
just an idea when i saw Newton's cradle.
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Steph1103 on Apr 07 '10
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EvanSobz on Apr 07 '10
sweet idea...something about the base bothers me.
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Melawrghk on Apr 08 '10
Thanks for the comment on my design!
I like the idea, but I think maybe the placement could be different. Ie, shift it down and make bigger? It's hard to judge without being able to resize and mess with it myself lol. |
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rollinkunz on Apr 08 '10
There's somethin' weird going on with the perspective- I think the 'strings' or what have you look lopsided (front ones should be at a different angle to match the back).
Also I would definitely change the text- make it more 'authentic' looking (use a font and deform it into perspective). |
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bullterrierman on Aug 17 '10
i absolutely agreed rollinkunz. the perspective is wrong on strings. you need a little touch.
good luck. by the way can you help me about my design please: Heart of Dog's Master |
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Jeanie.Gordon on Aug 17 '10
The bars are positioned crooked on the base. Other than that I really like the idea. :D And why are all of the strings different colors?
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Gabriele Nanni on Aug 17 '10
Very good idea. Some work on the particulars and will be perfect
Please, comment my Gone with the Dead |
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kedge on Sep 20 '10
just an idea when i saw Newton's cradle.
hope u would like it & give me some advises. |
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nauman_pak on Sep 20 '10
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monkeydog118 on Sep 20 '10
great
i like it! |
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puku on Sep 20 '10
i like it ... maybe I just would try another font for the text and try some shadows ? ... just my two cents
any idea for Amorīs pilots? |
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DuMone on Sep 20 '10
cooool!
I agree: lose the speech bubble. somehow it disturbs me the hand is cut. looks like a hand pointing at something, not like a finger going to tip the balls. if you have the time I would be happy if you could have a look at the latest version of mybull-shirt |
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Littleboyblack on Sep 22 '10
I love the idea here. This version is definitely the best, though if I had to change one thing, I would prob make the other balls less detailed whilst still retaining the characteristics of being annoyed/in pain... though I haven't a clue how you'd achieve this lol!! Good stuff!
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val.eee on Sep 22 '10
omg i love it!!!! comments about
Highway to nowhere |
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kedge on Oct 06 '10
just an idea when i saw Newton's cradle.
hope u would like it & give me some advises. |
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kedge on Oct 13 '10
just an idea when i saw Newton's cradle.
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jiska_ on Oct 13 '10
maybe remove the hand and show one of the balls still falling down with a frightened face.
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airobit on Oct 13 '10
I see your project for the first time and i think it's a funny idea, maybe i would add some shadows to the balls like you did in your first version.
if you have time please crit mine: here |
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airobit on Oct 13 '10
or you could draw the hand, handling the last ball on the right , between thumb and index finger ready to fall.
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DC Design on Oct 13 '10 I agree with iska, Idon't think it needs the hand, just have one of the balls falling.
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kedge on Oct 16 '10
just an idea when i saw Newton's cradle.
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Mightor on Oct 16 '10
Have another color added or change, the red doesn't look hot to me - since you got one hot silver ball there. Kindly score my design. Please vote $5. While you are at it, comment as well. I'm running 3 contest in my design. GUESS THE SCORE, BE 2010 COMMENTER and THE COMMENTER. http://www.threadless.com/submission/303369/True_Blue
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Gina Fisher on Oct 17 '10
It's a good idea maybe try to put shadows on the base and show more movement.
Also thanks for the comments |
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coolpix00 on Oct 18 '10
I think it looks good I like the extra ball rather than the hand
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kedge on Oct 18 '10
i hope it's the last version
but tell me what you think any other opinions welcome. thanks |
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SundarSiva on Oct 19 '10
I like it...IT IS VERY CREATIVE...how did u come up with the idea???...its great! XD
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KaMi WorkShop on Oct 19 '10
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jiska_ on Oct 19 '10
i love to see the development of that piece :D
i think you should present this design on a real model and then submit it :) |
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benderr on Oct 19 '10
Yeahh!! very funny! Submit this!
Please I would appreciate your comment and vote on my desing When Cows Attack Thanks! |
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kedge on Oct 21 '10
bumps :)
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HannahJaneD on Oct 27 '10
Cool I like it, though one of the shadows is smaller than the others
please have a look at mine http://www.threadless.com/critique/79154/Flying |
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kedge on Dec 11 '10
make a little change.
tell me what you think. any other opinions welcome. thanks |
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Tafata on Dec 12 '10
Amazing idea and great execution!!Think it's ready to be submitted...
If you have a moment to score and comment my design would be great!! |
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anir on Dec 12 '10
wow this si so much better than v1
you've really got it right maybe you could do something about the shadows under the metal balls , i mean they should be all black , without that gradient , i mean since you've kept it simple and with flat colors you should go all the way with that and if you have some time I would be really grateful if you scored my entry cat tee |
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oasis7467 on Dec 16 '10
i like it
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