I'm not sure if I should include the text or not? I could also move the graphic in the center of the tshirt and make it smaller. Any comments would be appreciated!
Thanks for all the feedback, I made the colors brighter too. I think it's ready for submit now. I'm thinking it would look good on bright blue color shown on top, and also the light blue color shown on the tshirt at the bottom.
Please let me know if you have any other feedback!
I don't like the addition of red on the popsicle. I would suggest keeping the yellow, but add white highlights and orange shadows to get the melting effect. Also the puddle of popsicle should be yellow too. :)
yeah I was thinking of the blood thing, but it wasn't working for me. Anyways one thing that you will want to portray more of to get the concept clear is that global warming is effecting the popsicle... right now it's just melting for no reason.
Very funny, but the global warming idea is not coming through in your illustration. Somehow provide clues in your illustration as to why they are melting.
awww poor popsicles. I feel for them. I think this t-shirt communicates the message in a very effective yet slightly humorous way. my only suggestion is that may be add some shades to the puddle it looks a a bit flat to me.
It's very cute, I like it. The colors are bright and fun.
Maybe add some shadows to the two popsicles themselves? Like make a shadow on the sides where their faces are. It'll add a little more depth to the piece, and some mood.
I'm also not sure how I feel about the text bubble. But I can't think of any alternatives, so I have no real complaints about it.
sad but true, global warming will leave popcicles extinct. this is a shirt that i think is ready to submit, and i say this because i believe that it is sending the message across in a funny way, and that was its original purpose, purpose fllfilled there are no real technical issues!
The one thing i see as a minor fallacy is that text bubbles dont come from dead Popsicle, sad but true. i would either make a Popsicle say it to the viewer, looking at the viewer. Or read it as a sentence or title above or below the the scene, otherwise, very clever of you!
Thanks for your feedback on my critique. I appreciate the new template suggestion, but unfortunately I had already submitted the design before I had a chance to change it. The final submission is finally up though! Please comment and vote:
I'm not sure if I should include the text or not? I could also move the graphic in the center of the tshirt and make it smaller. Any comments would be appreciated!