Global Warming Kills Popsicles!



I'm not sure if I should include the text or not? I could also move the graphic in the center of the tshirt and make it smaller. Any comments would be appreciated!

i like your ideas. maybe also add a sun above him?



it's very cute so far! keep it up!



could you look at mine?

i think it's really close to being done.

I Stared Too Long

I think this idea has been seen before...

i havent seen this idea before can you let me know where you've seen it??

I think you should remove the text and place the graphic at the center of the t-shirt. Other than that, it looks ready!

ohh so cute! love the idea... dont think ive seen this idea before i think u shud submit it!

i agree ,remove the text and you dont need to add the sun. i like their faces , looks funny =]

if you have time, please check my design http://www.threadless.com/critique/58580/peasy_the_peacock thanks

Global Warming Kills Popsicles!





I removed the text, and moved the graphic to the center based on the feedback (thanks for that by the way : )



Please let me know how else I can improve this!

I would make the color of the popsicles a bit brighter otherwise looks great!

I know it's morbid to laugh about the Global Warming issue per se..but this one's really hilarious :))) submit it! :D

WOW IT'S SOOOOO GOOD!

Global Warming Kills Popsicles!




Thanks for all the feedback, I made the colors brighter too. I think it's ready for submit now. I'm thinking it would look good on bright blue color shown on top, and also the light blue color shown on the tshirt at the bottom.



Please let me know if you have any other feedback!

Looks great! SUBMIT

I don't like the addition of red on the popsicle. I would suggest keeping the yellow, but add white highlights and orange shadows to get the melting effect. Also the puddle of popsicle should be yellow too. :)

i actually like the red because it makes it look like the popsicles is dying and there's blood leftover.

yeah I was thinking of the blood thing, but it wasn't working for me. Anyways one thing that you will want to portray more of to get the concept clear is that global warming is effecting the popsicle... right now it's just melting for no reason.

i agree with wat's said above

Please critique mine

Global Warming Kills Popsicles!


Another iteration based on feedback. Please give me more feedback!

definitely better than the previous versions. I think this baby is ready for submission!

really good, i like it, Submit!!

Global Warming Kills Popsicles!





I updated the outline around the eyes and mouth to dark grey.



Please comment!

I updated the outline of the color to be black instead of brown.



Please comment!

Global Warming Kills Popsicles!





please comment.

Very funny, but the global warming idea is not coming through in your illustration. Somehow provide clues in your illustration as to why they are melting.



Please take a look at mine and leave feedback:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/58727/The_Cheerful_Street

yeah, I second that. Maybe show like an uber angry sun or something. Maybe some gas-ey lines coming up from the ground. I love the idea though.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/58727/The_Cheerful_Street

I love the idea.. may be have a popsicle holding a sign that says global worming kills popsicles or something - like a protest u knoe

Also check out my slogans :)

Global Warming Kills Popsicles!




I added a little text bubble....lemme kn0w what u think!

i love it! i like the text bubble but im not sure about others. Generally people for some reason don't prefer texts

A lot of people don't like text, and I believe the meaning is quite obvious (not specifically global warming)

do u mean the meaning is obvious without the text? or with the text?

The text bubble is perfect. Please submit... its adorable.



Do you mind taking a look at mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/58850/Pink_Elephant

awww poor popsicles. I feel for them. I think this t-shirt communicates the message in a very effective yet slightly humorous way. my only suggestion is that may be add some shades to the puddle it looks a a bit flat to me.

cool

I like it, very good, try adding some shades, it does look very flat.

Global Warming Kills Popsicles!


okay added the shine to give it some dimension.

please comment :D

can people comment whether i should keep the 'text' bubble or get rid of it?

so far 2 people suggested to keep it and 2 said to get rid of it :S some clarity would be great!

sorry, here's the link to mine: http://threadless.com/critique/58871/Sea_Horsey



and yes for u i think i like it with the text. thanks.

It's very cute, I like it. The colors are bright and fun.



Maybe add some shadows to the two popsicles themselves? Like make a shadow on the sides where their faces are. It'll add a little more depth to the piece, and some mood.



I'm also not sure how I feel about the text bubble. But I can't think of any alternatives, so I have no real complaints about it.

i don't think shadows are necessary it looks good as is. Submit!

sad but true, global warming will leave popcicles extinct. this is a shirt that i think is ready to submit, and i say this because i believe that it is sending the message across in a funny way, and that was its original purpose, purpose fllfilled there are no real technical issues!

The one thing i see as a minor fallacy is that text bubbles dont come from dead Popsicle, sad but true. i would either make a Popsicle say it to the viewer, looking at the viewer. Or read it as a sentence or title above or below the the scene, otherwise, very clever of you!

Yeah, I agree. You should make the pop on the left say the tagline. Maybe give him an open mouth too so he looks like he's speaking.

That is Goooood

thanks for all the feedback guys, i will make some changes! : )

Global Warming Kills Popsicles!


Let me know if there are any more comments! : D

I'm not a fan of this style of animation, but you have taken a clever concept, and executed it successfully - great job

you've come a long way and i think it's ready for submission. Can't wait to vote for it!

fuck yes. (wait can i say that?)

Interesting how such a small change can make a huge difference.



I say submit it now. Looks great.

This hasn't been submitted yet? :)

Go! Sub :))

thanks to everyone for their feedback. i've submitted this now : ) i'll post the link once it's up!

Good luck! I will make sure to vote.



Thanks for your feedback on my critique. I appreciate the new template suggestion, but unfortunately I had already submitted the design before I had a chance to change it. The final submission is finally up though! Please comment and vote:

http://www.threadless.com/submission/247292/Taking_Out_the_Grouch/showmore,designs#lastcomment

amazing idea, you totally should submit!



check out mine =)

my design is now up!



Please vote and comment on it : D Vote

Good work.



Could you take a look at mine and let me know your thoughts:

Never Ending Flight

This is a really cool design, id totally wear it.

Keep up the cool designs and goodluck.

Check my critique out. http://tinyurl.com/ybuv5k8