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robbielee
   robbielee on Dec 15 '09
6 colors on light blue. Thanks for any feedback!
Pvt_Skittles
Pvt_Skittles on Dec 15 '09
Nice, but you're going to have to add a little something more. Give the wave a white crest, the volcano a craggy slope, some additional white caps in the foreground, etc. Definitely keep at it, just make it more detailed.
thelastmagician
thelastmagician on Dec 16 '09
i love this, this is adorable, but i agree with pvt. skittles, it needs to be more detailed. but a great start indeed!



could you check out mine?

I Stared Too Long
Zack Damundo
Zack Damundo on Dec 16 '09
I like the idea, and agree with the previous posters about detail. I'm distracted by the detail of the sun/ash/cloud. If the texture matched that of the wave and volcano, I think the design would feel more cohesive.





Would love some feedback on my design!
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